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How irresistibly sweet ;)

Seriously.

I love how you ended it, love how you portrayed Matt, love how you managed to put into the story such an ordinary part of a girl's life that people seem to neglect.

Thanks for sharing this story. Hope you'll write more of these :D

so cute...

Really loved it.
:D

Aww, this is super cute:) Too good:D

Aw... super cute!

OH this is so funny. Matt is funny. The adonis guy was funny. lacy sounds like an underwear. :D

Great fic! Sweet.

baha. thats such an awesome story!

Though I don't read oneshots as long as this one (because I'm lazy and only stick up to very humorous humor oneshots), I have to say that I liked this one and didn't get bored with it :'D

Like what the reviewer before me said, it's kind of cliche but I honestly think it's a fairly nice story. And (for me, just for me, dunno about you) I also think that cliche is not all that bad if it was written and "delivered" well-- like what you did~ So, yeah. Nice story XD;

Okay, I do admit that I'm quite entertained with your writing style, but I felt that this story wasn't as good as it should be. First of all, it felt very clichéd. Also, it was needlessly exaggerated, what, with the tedious descriptions that didn't really contribute much to the plot. There are certain words that can go without saying in a story, remember that. Brevity is a trait. // Besides that, Matt felt too underdeveloped. I know it's a one-shot, but for having such a big ending with the main character, you should have given him all the dialogue instead of Lucy, who in the end, just stood in the sidelines. I do hope you understand my point. :) // To properly balance this review, I'd have to commend your snippets of wit and your lack of malaprops. Other than that, never stop :) Take case.

For the 100th review, congratulations! This story is catchy, humorous and grabs me by the collar. I was particularly attracted to the title, which had happened to me before. XD Only it was a fair skin greek god.
LOL.
cheers,
~crim

What a sweet, light-hearted, amusing story! I loved all the details you added, from Darren's wariness at Julie's grumpy mood to her reaction at lack of cereal options to Mark's reaction at Julie saying hello to the no emotion of the buddy Julie bought tampons from.

And of course how adorable was Matt's nervousness at the end? And his last line...simply adorable. Definitely going on my favourite's list!

I loved this! It was awesome!

that's so CUTE! Best friends in love..