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| thoughtsofwisdom 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abusethe ending was absolutelty precious |
| RavioliShenanigans 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseAw! That was so cute! Good job! |
| Artemis of the Golden Apple 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseAw...that was so cute and happy. Actually, this challenge inspired me to try it out... |
| you-stole-all-the-names 2008-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, I loved this. your style really relaxed me and I haven't enjoyed myself this much with a one shot for a long time. I'm a bit weirded out with what they did to Adonis, I think it was a bit too much, but hell, I loved it either way. Great job, keep up the good work. I love the last paragraph, and the last few sentences. Enjoy |
| cherrypiesizzle 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abusePMS actually occurs a few weeks before your period, not during your period; hence the name 'Premenstrual Syndrome' |
| barkadaaa 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseomgg that was so uber cute loved it ! |
| Songs of an Angel 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseMatt is so dreamy! =)) |
| Evelyn Bleu 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseMatt's so cute! I absolutely LOVE him. Bryce was a jerk. |
| Faithfully Yours 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseOh! That was brilliant! I absolutely loved it! It was just... Adorable. =) |
| found.eventually 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseYou know, when I opened this review-box-thingy (yeah I don't really know what's it called), I couldn't start typing immediately, because my hands were busy muffling my horribly loud giggles. It's 12.02 A.M., imagine what my mum would think if she wakes up only to find her daughter grinning like an idiot and swinging her legs in excitement. But darn it, this is such an awesome one-shot. |
| LiMay 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseAAWW!! I LOVE IT!! Matt is so adorable and sweet and nice and just AAWW! stupid. adonis. hot. guy. ugh! MATT! |
| Lulu Jones 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseAw! What a cute story! I love Matt! Keep up the awesome work. |
| Faith Adeline 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseaw, how cute! I loved it :) Faith |
| dimethylmercury 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseThe last part after they return home, I think, would be the hardest part to right, when they get together, since it's a one shot, but I thought you did well for that bit, not making it too rushed or sudden(: Your humour writing skills rock!(: |
| kookoo4kokonuts 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseAw...How sweet! A smile came upon my face when i read the ending... |