 FellowMan 2007-12-31 . chapter 1Not bad, but not a "knock your socks off" sort of piece either: but you seem to already know this. It is thoughtful, though it is lacking when it comes to innovative twists or lilts, though, not wholly so. :) |
 Tranquil Thorns 2007-12-31 . chapter 1I like the way you started the poem out: Blank paper, blank paper.
I like how you went on to 'address' the paper, ask it questions, talk to it.
It reminded me of "Mirror Mirror on the Wall" sort of thing. =P |