This is a beautiful poem and I'm pretty picky.

Poor Horatio. He's always overshadowed by Hamlet. I liked how you kept the characters very much in character in this piece :)

You have a very distinct writing style with your poems,, making them like lyrics with the italics and parentheses laced in. I love your illusions; the reference to mythology was interesting. My favorite lines would have to be ‘While time runs away/With hopeless snatches of dreams’

~Dreamless~

Sometimes it amazes me that others feel the same way I do. Take care.

This poem is beautiful, you use a lot of good vocabulary and I like how you tied your feelings in with Shakespeare. It was a little bit confusing that you saw yourself as a female Horatio.