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| Isca 2008-09-19 ch 1,  | abusePoor Horatio. He's always overshadowed by Hamlet. I liked how you kept the characters very much in character in this piece :) |
| Dreamless_Infinity 2008-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou have a very distinct writing style with your poems,, making them like lyrics with the italics and parentheses laced in. I love your illusions; the reference to mythology was interesting. My favorite lines would have to be ‘While time runs away/With hopeless snatches of dreams’ ~Dreamless~ |
| she smolders 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseSometimes it amazes me that others feel the same way I do. Take care. |
| fairytale failure 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is beautiful, you use a lot of good vocabulary and I like how you tied your feelings in with Shakespeare. It was a little bit confusing that you saw yourself as a female Horatio. |