this is getting very depressing.. why did william have to die?.. that was his only friend.. =(

i am in love with this story.. it just speaks to me somehow, like all of your work does.. =)

this uncle cal is a very suspicious character.. =)

is anything new going to happen?..

this story is really tragic so far.. is this boy ever going to know happiness... i hope his "dad" is found out about the abuse thing..=)

good.. i like it.. so far so good.. what made you write this story?.. bf or something?.. =)

is this all you have so far?.. it is really depressing.. a little vivid.. good overall..