Reviews for Too Little Too Late

animeXD 2008-01-02 ch 1,	abuseomg!! i love it!! it so awesome!! im going to save it to my favs! u should really consider becoming a poet lol^^ animexD
readyforpeace 2008-01-01 ch 1,	abuseI like the tone of this a lot it's very strong. My favorite part would have to be "What started as a charade A simple yet protective masquerade" And the last line is also a great way to end it, it stays with the reader.
Unknown Survivor 2007-12-31 ch 1,	abuseVery nice work here. I like how you have some words in caps. It sets a nice tone to this piece. The reader (or at least me) can almost hear the narrator shouting to be heard. Lovely job on this. ~Unknown Survivor~