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Reviews For: Too Little Too Late
animeXD 2008-01-02 . chapter 1
omg!! i love it!! it so awesome!! im going to save it to my favs! u should really consider becoming a poet lol^^

animexD
alwaysthereforyou 2008-01-01 . chapter 1
I like the tone of this a lot it's very strong. My favorite part would have to be "What started as a charade A simple yet protective masquerade" And the last line is also a great way to end it, it stays with the reader.
Unknown Survivor 2007-12-31 . chapter 1
Very nice work here. I like how you have some words in caps. It sets a nice tone to this piece. The reader (or at least me) can almost hear the narrator shouting to be heard. Lovely job on this.

~Unknown Survivor~
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