Reviews for Last Fighter, Last Heart

Reviews For: Last Fighter, Last Heart

Zyril 2008-09-29 ch 7,	abuseGo Stefan! ^_^ Wow! This chapter was awesome!! I hope there's more!
tinglingsensation 2008-08-14 ch 6,	abuseI really like your story. I generally adore fantasy, and especially those bonding stories with mates and the whole bunch of it. and you managed to make it exremely non-cliché. And you also included the shota very well, it's not like those scary daddy-son relationship-stories I read on some other sites (no offense to those who like that kind of story). The story looks like a lot of consideration and work was put into it, or maybe you're that sort of talented author who writes a chapter, post it immediately and it's perfect. anyway, I like all of your characters, each one is great in their own kind of way. I must admit I really like the way Stefan turns out. I wouldn't mind having a Heart myself. =) So, all in all, a very satisfying read, just like a real novel. I really can't wait for that last chapter. Happy end, I hope!
Bedlam Chaos 2008-07-25 ch 6,	abuseWoaw. Are they going to fight dozen of dragons ? That's tough. Hope for them it will work and hope for Julian he will overcome his disgust for himself and go out of his blindness. Thanks for the story.
D's Silly G 2008-07-23 ch 6,	abuseaww me hopes they get it together soon. and only one chapret left? it'll be a busy chapter as there seems to be alot that's going to happen in it, thou i'm just happy you're posting again, it wasn't even two days ago i was sitting here thinking to meself about this story and if it was ever going to be finished.
Zyril 2008-07-23 ch 6,	abuseNo! Only one more chapter?! Ah, well, I suppose all good things must come to an end...but this was so sad! Poor Julian and Stefan!
Zyril 2008-07-15 ch 5,	abuseI love this one!! This chapter was my favorite! When's the next chapter coming out??
D.H. L'Orange 2008-06-14 ch 4,	abuseupdate
Clarice 2008-06-05 ch 5, anon.	abuseI really enjoy this story. I can't wait to read what will happen to the main characters. I hope that you don't stop this story.
D's Silly G 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuseo i like what you did with chapter one here :)
D's Silly G 2008-05-27 ch 5,	abuseok at first I wasn't sure if I was going to like this one quite as much, though I thought that about the road one too and look how that turned out :) I LOVE IT! I mean W0W its great and you should update it soon pretty please makes puppy eyes
music-is-luv 2008-05-17 ch 5,	abuseDude, I think this is the best story I've read on here so far! I doth my hat to thee, brave knight! xD UPDATE PLEASE!
TwilightZelda 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseWell I like it. The idea is pretty original. You might want to bring back your summary if you want to grab people's attention (I'm assuming that you changed it because of the lack of reviews). Try reviewing other people's stories to get yourself out there if you haven't done that yet. There's a few forums dedicated to getting reviews on this website where you can try asking people to look at your work too. At least that's what I'm trying to do as I don't have much reviews myself for my story.
Bedlam Chaos 2008-05-08 ch 5,	abuseThere's at least one reader. And a reader who enjoys a lot reading this story. I was wondering when your story took place in the past... Something like 100 BC or something like that, isn't it ?
Bedlam Chaos 2008-04-16 ch 3,	abuseIt's a bit funny how, if the story hasn't some reviews, people doesn't even try to read it. This story is cool and the way they find each other at the end is well timed. I'm happy for the guys bot wondering how they will do against the dragons...
Bedlam Chaos 2008-03-27 ch 2,	abuseThis story is cool, really. It changes a lot from de usual stories we can read here. I hope you'll continue to write it 'cause it deserves it ;)

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