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kazoua 2009-11-16 . chapter 8
Julian and Stefan are very sexy together, yes. That's my first thought. But yeah. They're super sexy but I'm not really feeling the depth of their emotion in this chapter. I love it! Don't get me wrong. I love it and I think you're an amazing writer, but just the end of this chapter seemed like the sex was just for sex. Maybe I missed the big point, but it seemed like... yeah... sex for sex.

I have no idea if I ever reviewed for your other chapters, and if I didn't, I'm sorry. I really like your characters are the whole setup, you know? It's not unique in that whole 'omg i never heard of this sorta stuff' way, but it's unique in how you portray it. The emphasis is different than how I usually see it being done.

I love the 'thing' going on between Andreas and Sera. It's hearbreaking, truthfully. They're not young and fated like the other two, so it's like a contrast. I'm juxtaposing them in my mind right now and it's like they have less passion but not any less emotion present. Get it or am I just rambling? Haha. I think I'm rambling. I'll stop.
Rubedo Jr. 2009-09-06 . chapter 8
And I remember bugging you so much to complete the next chapter, and look who's late to the review table? It was definitely worth it to wit so long - they'll getting underway, and Julian and Stefan just...went at it. It was a short chapter, but I figure, once you're back in the groove, it'll only keep getting bigger.
Zyril 2009-09-05 . chapter 8
First off, YAY update! Second, this chapter was absolutely stellar! I love all the characters! ^_^ And that last scene...hurray for Stefan and Julian getting what they've been wanting! That was hot! :D Keep up that awesome writing! ^_^ I look forward to the next chapter!
Oriel Kurosaki 2009-06-14 . chapter 7
I was about half way through this when I realized you were the author. I actually said "figures." I'm supposed to be studying for finals...but I got addicted to another one of your fics. *sigh*
Stefan is the cutest thing ever! And I loved the Romans. They're those friends everyone has that you just can't manage to dislike, no matter how much they annoy you.
Isamara 2009-05-16 . chapter 7
Hehe! Go Stefan!
LOve the sotry so far, please keep writing!

Isamara
The-Camster 2009-04-21 . chapter 7
Normally, I'm not a fan of dragons being posed as the bad guys all the time, but I like this story by you. Though, now looking at the last update date, are you continuing this? Or have you stopped writing it because I noticed you have other stories that had come out after this one was last updated. I really do like it, and for some reason, Andreas cracks me up.

Keep On Writing!
~The-Camster
ChaoticFenris 2009-04-16 . chapter 7
i must have more of this story! :D
elyrian 2009-03-12 . chapter 7
I have really enjoyed this story so far. It is very original and well written. I am interested to see how the group will take down the Prime Dragon. And of course, the continued evolution of both Sera and Andreas' as well as Julian and Stefan's relationship. The Romans also add some comic relief. I like their antics, even if they tease Julian a bit. :) Please keep up the good work!
Rubedo Jr. 2009-01-14 . chapter 7
Well, if this isn't an odd place to end a tale, I don't know what is!
Knaifatic 2009-01-07 . chapter 7
The plot of this story is simply amazing - I love the ideas, setting, characters, the way it's written... everything! It's awesome, keep writing :D
Roman C Lee 2009-01-02 . chapter 7
Hehe, I love the Romans XD. They're hilarious! They've got somewhat annoying tendencies, but it's only annoying to the the characters in the story. It's great to just sit here reading and snickering at everything they say XD.

WOO! They've sort of, kind of, done something. Heh, at least Julian is less pent up and freaked out now. That took a while *sigh out with fatigue*. Julian is/was TORTURING himself! XD The tree humping... oh my GOD, lol.

I like this universe--a lot of stories have boring settings that I've come across, but this one is so much FUN! Hehe, Dragons and all that, it's grin inducing.
I'm looking forward to your update ^-^.
Amarena 2008-11-24 . chapter 7
Whoa. It's been a long time since the last time I read something of yours. Gotta say, I'm still digging your writing style - such different, original and refreshing stories that I love.

I'm a real big lurker, by the way.

So~~... yeah, I'll be here when you update the next chapter. And the next. And the next.
erin2468 2008-11-21 . chapter 7
I stayed up way to late to read this (4am!)! But it was just so good that I had to keep reading. So glad Stefan and Julian finally came to an understanding of some kind.

Julian is sort of clueless sometimes when it comes to Stefan but he doesn't know any better either.

Sera and Andreas, seems to be something forming there. I think they are good for eachother.

This story sort of reminds me of the Sword of Truth series. But with slash, and no magic...ok not really but kind of? They could be set in the same time period, with the traveling by horse, fighting with dragons...or maybe not. But close!

Anyways I'm rambling.

Awesome fic so far, hope you find time to post the next chapter soon.
JtheChosen1 2008-11-14 . chapter 7
HOLY CRAP THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY!

u write excellent character dialogues and interactions, not to mention the fight scenes are great as well!

keep up the amazing work!
Zyril 2008-09-29 . chapter 7
Go Stefan! ^_^ Wow! This chapter was awesome!! I hope there's more!
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