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| crazilazigurl 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseanother good one. if emotions are the eyes to the soul, then your poems are the mouth...lol..good stuff...a new favorite! |
| A Free Elf 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseHmm... This isn't really a poem is it? It's just some jerkily-written prose accompanied with the overuse of the enter key. Plus, why does just one verse rhyme? Strange piece. |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abusewow, that was amazing. so creative and well written. i absolutely adored this one! the whole idea of the class was great and then the description added to it so much more. good work! [+ favorite story list & C2] |
| relapse into change 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abusegod, this is ** BEAUTIFUL i love the line(s) 'kleenex are more than a friend They're a lifestyle (P.S. The heart stopper is in the cabinet' it was the best line(s) in the poem and by heart stopper do you mean gun or something..? i'm sorry i'm just not really bright though...but anyway amazing poem |