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Reviews For: Heartbreak 101

crazilazigurl
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abuseanother good one. if emotions are the eyes to the soul, then your poems are the mouth...lol..good stuff...a new favorite!
A Free Elf
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseHmm...

This isn't really a poem is it? It's just some jerkily-written prose accompanied with the overuse of the enter key.

Plus, why does just one verse rhyme?

Strange piece.
smile for the sunshine
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abusewow, that was amazing. so creative and well written. i absolutely adored this one! the whole idea of the class was great and then the description added to it so much more. good work!

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relapse into change
2007-12-31
ch 1,
abusegod, this is ** BEAUTIFUL
i love the line(s)
'kleenex are more than a friend
They're a lifestyle
(P.S. The heart stopper is in the cabinet'
it was the best line(s) in the poem
and by heart stopper do you mean gun or something..?
i'm sorry i'm just not really bright though...but anyway
amazing poem
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