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ireadtoomanybooks 2009-11-28 . chapter 27
Heehee :D Love these characters! They're all so cute, I just want to hug them to death! Just a-wondering... is there gonna be more? coz it was last update in '07... -.-' Anyways, love this :D
SpiralxBound 2009-06-18 . chapter 25
The military couple is actually my favorite. I hope toread more in the future.
Kaiyako Kagami 2009-06-15 . chapter 27
Hey!

OMG. I am so sorry that I haven't reviewed! I just got so sidetracked with school and everything. But now it's better, summers finally here!

Anyways, I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. Hahaha. I swear these two are my favorite couple. They're just so funny! Ringo's all "this is weird" and Takayama's like "NO! I LOVE YOU."

Hahaha. It makes me laugh just thinking about it! :)

I love this story and I can't wait for the final chapter.

TILL THEN :)

-Kaiyako Kagami
Miss Four 2009-03-06 . chapter 27
Hah-hah! Finally! A new chapter!
Bravo, bravo! I loved this one! Throughout the chapter, I kept thinking, "I can totally see this happening in my Drama Class!" Too bad Takayamama-sama isn't in my drama class. That'd make my life pretty awesome (or terrifying).
nyves 2009-03-04 . chapter 27
Aww I'm happy that there's gonna be more chapters added to this story, its so fun and fluffy, I'd be sad to see it end. All the characters are just so lovable! I adore Takayama and Ringo! Keep writing, you're my favorite author on fictionpress. Oh and please tell me where this other forum is because I really want to read the branch story!
Miss Four 2008-11-14 . chapter 26
Oh no! Final chapter!?
As I requested with HB, please make the last chapter so awesome it'll make me cry. I demand it!
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...
(though she knows she's not nearly strong enough to demand anything from anyone.)
I don't wanna see it end, but I can't wait.
Awesome chapter, by the way. Loved it.
Hugs and Virtual Good Luck Abound,
Gao Yun Yun
miss-ella 2008-11-01 . chapter 26
Ah! I reached the 26th chapter without realising it! I only recently wanted to find something completely different to read, so I came onto Fiction Press, instead of my usual hangouts (I.e FFN + AFF). And loe and behold, I find your story! And I like how it sounds, because it kinda reminds me of my favourite manga (Prince Of Tennis Nya! So cute) And your an amazing writer, who really portrays your characters well.

That's the main thing that makes me conect POT (look above) with your fic; the characters. POT has characters with very obvious traits, much like yours. And I love that! It works so well, I guess, because I didn't really like Shounen-ai before I read POT (Not that POT is Shounen-ai, but with the lack of girls in it, it might as well be...) And I guess I should stop rambling...

But yes, I really like your story. My favourite character is Hanatani... He's so awesome! Asai comes in close behind; He's got such a cool personality; even if he is a bit cold to Ohmaru(did I spell that right?). My favourite pairing though is Takayama and Ringo. It's such a hillarious couple! Though I'll admit at the start I kinda wanted Takayama to date Hanatani. That woulda just been cute.

But yes! You must update! (Well, not really, but it would be appreciated!)

Miss Ella.
Kaiyako Kagami 2008-10-30 . chapter 26
h e y ~ !

Yay ~ hundredth reviewer, I am so proud -tears- LoL.

Perfect ending for the main pair, I mean really I think you covered everything that would happen in their relationship in this certain time frame. And ha-ha, Haru's so cute and Kenta's so mature about everything.

Nice touch making Haru jealous by the way, =p LoL, jealously always makes a relationship stronger (if it doesn't break it up first that is...) ha-ha -swirly eyes- someone's been watching to many love dramas lately ^^

Oh my gosh! I can't wait till the next chapter. RINGOO! You can't do that! Hmm...but I do wonder what kind of stunt Takayama pulled to get that to happen...ha-ha, I always seem to blame everything that goes wrong in that relationship to him, but maybe it's not.

Maybe Ringo's just...insecure! l o l ^^

Anyway, I totally loved this and I am SO looking forward to your ending ^^

~ k a i y a k o
TheLadyPendragon 2008-10-30 . chapter 26
lol This chapter is as cute--and slightly awkward--as the one where Haru said Kenta was the girl. He's growing into a handsome man! Rawr! Go Haru! Oh noes! The end? You can't mean that!
Kaiyako Kagami 2008-10-25 . chapter 25
Hey!

~ Y a y ! Another chapter =D

By the way the first sentence of the chapter is repeated in your before-thought. ^^ Happens with me a lot of the time, in the end I have to go back and edit. Gah! >< so annoying!

Ha-ha, I'm so glad that you wrote this chapter about these two. I mean in a relationship that someone's (not exactly cold) but portrays his affection in subtle ways there's always room to write more. ^^

Oh and also, I don't know if you meant to do this or not but there isn't one of those line-divider things before where it says "next chapter"

I loved this so much, I mean slow moving couples are my favorite type to read. I was never really into lovey-dovey gush-gush. Don't get me wrong, I don't hate it or anything. In fact if it's a couple I like it's great in all (like Ringo and the Drama Queen, ha-ha) But as a generalization, I'm always kind of liked slower relationships. Ha-ha. ^^

But there are certain instances where that's not true...for example a certain book I just read for English =shudders=

Ugh, I can never get my words straight x[ LoLz, what I'm trying to say is that I like the way you write. And I like the light that you gave in this chapter.

Keep up the good work!

L o v e d // I t ~ !

= K a i =
TheLadyPendragon 2008-10-24 . chapter 25
lol Asai's last line was pure gold.

“I like you Lieutenant Ohmura. And I hope you will continue to stay by my side and never give me up… to the enemy.”

I felt like he was trying to say girls are the enemy. ROFL
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2008-09-04 . chapter 1
Oh! This is a great story! I'm adding this to my faves! Um...if you don't mind me asking, would you like to see/review my stories? They're called The Catalyst's Rebellion (TCR) and Stargazer. Sorry to ask in case you're busy. All in all, keep up the good work!
Gao Yun Yun 2008-09-03 . chapter 24
o.o Did you know that a cork can kill someone?
Ah-hah, just something that this chapter reminded me of. So cute! I apologize, but I have to get off the 'net soon to do my homework. Missed my bus today, so I decided I should get around to FINALLY reading this chap.
Well, good luck! Hugs and Virtual Mice abound,
Gao Yun Yun
TheLadyPendragon 2008-08-27 . chapter 24
Aw, Sakurai and Sato are my favorite couple. :) Evertything about them is so cute.
Miss Four 2008-08-08 . chapter 23
Awa! So cute! Uh-hoo, reading this always gives me inspiration for DD-- which I REALLY need right now. (sob)
Ah! My Beloved Army Boys (Men?)! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Cookies and Virtual Hugs abound,
Yun-Yun (or B2I)


P.S. I was checking my e-mail and noticed I had a PM from you (thank you for responding!). I clicked on it, began to read, and then my Computer froze--I lost the PM! It's not anywhere in my Old Mail box (maybe because of the date?), so, I'M SO SORRY!
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