"Wow" was my first thought. I love the irony and sarcasm in this poem. Most of all, I love it when people use history in their poems. Great job!

it's really well-thought

though some of your name drops were very specific

which i guess some people like, but too much seems to take away from the readers' enterpretations (to me at least)

"squaws to Leviticus/and embroidery" is so, so, so x oo (infinity haha :/) beautiful. i love that section.

in fact, i think i will put those five words together on a posterboard for my wall. or something.

your title is also nice. fitting.

it's a nice piece.

-ty.

"Oh My God," -Jars of Clay