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| GRAYTEXT 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abuseYou've got a good plot going. You should finish it. |
| Lana Mira Beth 2008-01-01 ch 2, | abuseThis isn't bad, even if it was written 5-or-so years ago. I don't really get how it's part humour (little bits were funny, but mostly it was actually pretty tragic, in a good way). Anyway, you do have something here, and it definitely should be continued. And thanks for the review. :) |