Hahaha. Wow. Yeah, that would have been a little awkward to be walked-in on by the paramedics lol.

Haha, you should feel naughty lol.

I guess I didn't put the alert on or else it didn't work cuz it never showed new chapters!

But anyhow, I'm doing that now. Haha, that TOTALLY rhymed.

And that was very cruel, giving all the options and then just making them wait. Way to rub it in! Sheesh.

LOVE THE STORY! And I'm gonna show it to my friend Steven, cuz he would LOVE IT!

x

Jenna

UGH! ((dad kicking me off the computer so she's writing a REALLY quick review))

I love the chapter! XD Although here's a VERY nice hint for a next chapter based on the paramedic knowledge I already know. After a person drowns and they are able to protest against going to the hospital - they recommend that the person is under FULL observation.

((nudge, nudge)) ((stabby, stabby)) DAMN IT! LET TY STAY WITH JOSH! ((not so subtle hinting at work))

There's something else - but I'll call you and tell it to you!

I loved the chapter Ty! I don't think your main-man is a whore. He's just in WUV!

*kills you* NO! BAD TY! You are not allowed to have authors notes as complete chapters! That totally mislead me! I'm going to rip your heart out! Just like you did to me!

((P.S. I still don't think it's plausible D - but I enjoyed the edited version WAY more than the other version))

How AWKWARD is it to answer the door without clothes on? XD I can only imagine... o_o

Haha "What a JACKASS." XD;; I would think the same thing. x'3

AND OMFG EVOLUTION! O: Lord knows we need it.

I can't wait to see how far they go *Eyebrow waggle.* :'D

You totally jipped me out of a chapter! D:

Haha, I'm not too mad. A little disappointed, maybe :'3

This just means that you need to update faster, haha :D Else I MIGHT NEVER UPDATE 15:67 AGAIN! O:

No. I'm totally being a self-centered, controlling bitch. _;;

XD

Oh, you know you planned for this, you sly little fox. ;D Hehe

I'm glad that Ty isn't dead, y'know. o_o Because part of me thinks that Josh would've... well, let's not get into this. XD

And by the way, Josh's inner dialogue was hilarious. x'3 I know how it feels to want to kiss someone, but the timing be terribly -off.- o_o XD But it certainly made for one great scene XD

I love how you put "God: ..." XD Amazing It just made me get this mental picture of this really cute tan, rich, emo-ish boy.

Yummy. :9

AND OH, MY! The predicament Ty is in reminds me of Chuck Palahniuk's book, "Haunted." Only... a lot less embarassing. (I don't know if you've ever read "Haunted," but I recommend it :D) XD Hopefully, the god-in-the-form-of-a-man will save him. 8D AND THEN THEY'LL FALL IN LOVE *Insert gay sparkles here, plz.*

Haha And I adore how cynical Ty is. And self-conscious. I can totally see myself in him I have those same quirks. :D

(AND OMFG I TOTALLY JUST GOT AN E-MAIL SAYING THAT YOU UPDATED AGAIN! I've gotta hurry up and review! O: )

So. Yes. Fantastic chapter (I'm still loving how unorthodox-ly [not a word, haha] it's written.). :3 I'm flying off to read more *fwoosh.* :'D

Ty... I don't even know what to say. There are so many mechanical things wrong with this chapter, I don't even know where to begin.

I've been certified twice for CPR in the same year (once by my dad and once in my health class) and I know that is NOT the way you do it.

Josh needs to rethink his strategy. Like... uh, call 9-1-1 before trying to get in Ty's pants. And Ty wouldn't be in ANY shape to make out with ANYONE - Tom Brady or not.

Ty... ((smacks you)) I couldn't enjoy the chapter because there were so many unrealistic things in here! ;_; That depresses me, because it was a really good chapter.

I have no problem with them making out... but after a near death situation. Yeah, not likely. :( I sowee Ty

Ha, you named the dogs... And a question. Can't you stop killing your characters? Like... EVER? Some... occastional time... where nothing bad happens. Yeah, that would be nice. Normal even. Normal.

Who shall come to the rescue? Damn it, it better be one of the dogs for screwing things up royally. But I'm leaning more towards Josh-God in this case.

Those dogs better run and let him know... Unless Josh was being a stalkerish type and staring at Ty through a window or something... Which... would be sweet in a creepy kind of way.

And WHO says I'm full of BOAR crap? BOAR crap? REALLY now? BOAR crap.

P.S: "Your work is horrible and you should never write again" ((shoots the first person who says that)) And i'll shoot the second, third, forth, fifth, etc... people who say that!

I YU!

Gr. Okay, so that last review was actually supposed to be for THIS chapter, so now I just get to review them backwards. /

But I love it! Especially the introduction when it said "God:" cuz it hadn't said his name yet. :D

Hmm.. does a certain Josh come to his rescue? Can't wait to find out!

Update again SOON! D

-Jenna

Interesting idea..

And I like how its written part narrative, part script.

Good start, now on to the next chapter!

-Jenna

:D So I saw that you had a new story, and I decided to take a peeky-poo at it. :3

XD "Watch your mouth."

"Pardon my French."

Best. Lines. Ever. XD I giggled throughout the rest of the chapter because of that. :'D

AND OH. *Waggles eyebrows.* Be seen and not heard. Sounds kinky xD Haha I had to!

I also like the fact that this isn't written in "traditional" format. I have a thing for stories that aren't always "asldk," said so-and-so. :D I think it's interesting and unique

As is the plot! I've never read a story about a silent maid before. D

You can bet your ass that I'll be looking forward to updates on this. 8D

Why do I have a feeling that this was written soley from a daily experience? I'm sorry, but I can't help but laugh! By the way... did you finish digging that ditch?