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casi
2008-04-17
ch 1, anon.
abusethat sounds like an awful experience that made for good writing. its sad how sometimes the worst things in life can bring about the best writing. I'm sorry this happened, and that you lost someone who had at one time been so very close to you, but it made for a good story. You did a good job.
Twilight Starr
2008-01-03
ch 1,
abuseThis is so sad. Great title. You did a great job on the summary and the story. I felt so bad for the people. Terrific work.

~Twilight Starr~
maximusrexmundi
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseWow. Very interesting... story? To tell the truth I dont know how much of your writing is based off of reality, so I dont want to call it a good story yet, because it was actually really sad (but written well). As a side note... why does it seem girls named Jen are always the source of trouble?
.mate.feed.kill.repeat.
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseIt's so... sad. But it happens to all the people that don't deserve it or would ever expect it. (I lost my best friend, because of ** poetry. I can't believe it.)

I enjoyed how you took your own experiences and made them into a very interesting and convincing fic. Had you not specifically pointed out that it was the true story of your recent life, I don't think anyone but your friends would have known.

-stix-
melbell
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuse*hugs*
*more hugs*
*even more hugs*
ill still be here in january
if you'd like
if not,
i unerstand.
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