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Writing4Eternity 2008-10-09 ch 33,	abuseFirst off I want to say that i like this story...ALOT. the only thing I don't like is-Rome is such a cry-baby. I'm always left slightly uncomfortable when reading one of her crying episodes. I'll admit, she has some good reasons to cry most of the time but woah dude.
XSpiderMonkeyX 2008-10-03 ch 33,	abuseAhh I love that song =) Anyways I kinda forgot who Marcus Jacobson is? lol. Can you tell because I was suspecting some people but I'm not sure =I Anyways Loved reading this =). Great Job
Robyn Night 2008-09-21 ch 33,	abuseGreat chapter!! Keep them coming! :) Sorry to hear about your toe!! Hope it gets better fast! :]
closexyourxeyes 2008-09-18 ch 33,	abuseSo for the past five days, all I've wanted to do once I get home from work/school is read this story. I'm not joking; this is incredible. I've never been a fan of vampires or vampire stories, and quite honestly, I'm not sure why I decided to read this, but I'm glad I did. You're a good writer with good ideas, you've given your characters good development, and you express things well. I was never quite confused, moreso left wanting to know more, and I'm glad I now know the story behind Ly. Normally I at least attempt to criticize writers, just so they know they always have something to improve upon, but there's not anything for me to say. The only thing worth mentioning is that there are a few spelling and grammatical areas in each chapter, but I've managed to get past that and still understand. :) I look forward to another chapter!
inuyasha finatic 2008-09-14 ch 33,	abusethat was great you are a really good writer so keep up the great work and update ASAP
Carmel March 2008-09-14 ch 33,	abuseThis story always manages to make me a happy happy person, with each and every update :) Great chapter. Can't wait for the next bit! And sorry I took so long to review! ~Carm~
Sekhra 2008-09-13 ch 33, anon.	abuseOh, Ly. Why don't you and Rome just live happily ever after, already? Urgh, this is frustrating. Excellent writing, as always. I am perpetually impressed. Only thing is I've forgotten who Marcus is. Was he Rome's school friend that hated Ly? Except from the letters, it seems like he's a spy for someone, I'm assuming vampires, trying to infiltrate Silver Lake. So, yeah... not getting that part. But I assume I'll figure it out in future chapters. xoxo, Sekhra
akai-sora 2008-09-13 ch 33,	abuseHola! Nice to see another chapter, as usual. (Fair warning: this review might be a little short 'cause it's late here and my eyes are closing on me.) Well, we all knew politicians were evil: this just proves it. Makes sense, though, doesn't it? The guy who was invited to the political rally is part of the secret club...fat lot of good it did him now that he's dead and all. Anywho, a few typos, but I commiserate with you on the work overload and junk, so we'll let it go. (Fall has arrived and with it, the first year of college. Yay. Don't I just exude enthusiasm?) I did find myself wondering, however, what Ly would do if Rome suddenly threw a punch at him...would his vampire instincts take over and block it? Or would he get hit, stand in shock for a moment, and then yell at her like a whiny kid even though it doesn't hurt? Random thought for the night...well, can't wait to see where this little plot bunny takes us next, and I hope your toe gets better soon!
East-0f-Eden 2008-09-13 ch 33,	abuseexcellent. the waiting is worth the story. it can't imagine it to be spring there when we're dealing with fall in the northern hemisphere. So enjoy spring!
bubblie130 2008-09-02 ch 32,	abuseWOW,that story has got 2 be 1 of the best i have read so far, ur an amazing writer P.s Update soon plz
Sekhra 2008-08-18 ch 32, anon.	abuseHa ha, I completely sympathize about Viva la Vida. Something about that Roman cavalry line gets me every time. Loved it, as always. I thought the way Ly told his story, continuing through Rome's interruptions, was exactly right for his character. My only qualm is that it seems like Rome should be stronger than that. She understands Ly enough that I'd think she'd know once he started she had a responsibility to listen. She's not so selfish as to make him suffer to save herself. I just thought she seemed a bit whiny and... female in this chapter. Keep going, please. I know how martial arts makes you tired, but please keep it up! Ha ha, that's kind of hypocritical coming from me, but whatever. xoxo, Sekhra
SNB 2008-08-18 ch 32,	abuseThis story is awesome! Took awhile for me to read it all, but it was intense. I loved hearing Ly's past. It gave a good insight with him. Well I look forward to your update! Great job!
Isabella22 2008-08-17 ch 32,	abuseOh my gosh. This was a perfect chapter and I feel so angry/sorry for Ly. :( About not adding more detail without making it sound stupid, do you think you could add it in the next A/N? I want to know more about him (and I think she should learn something very personal about Rome, too) Update soon. I can't wait for the next chap.
Robyn Night 2008-08-16 ch 32,	abuseThat was a greay chapter!! Keep updating... i loved hearing about Ly's past! Good luck w/ the karate!!
sungirl224 2008-08-16 ch 32,	abuseWOW! I've been looking through this site for a few days now and I have to say this is the only story that I would actually pick up and buy in a bookstore. I def. can't wait to read the rest of the story, its also the longest one I've read all the way through on this website. Your characters are so real and act like I would expect an actual person to act, not just moving along with the story. I'm starting to confuse myself now so I'll stop but your story is very intense and raw. Can't wait to read more and I will def. check out your other stories!

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