 ann03525 2009-10-28 . chapter 38Thank you so much for this story, I'm surprised that it doesn't have more reviews, because it's amazing. The storyline is very complex and the characters are unbelievably real. Well done. |
 Billie Rae 2009-08-29 . chapter 38Oh. My. God. This is epic! I made a good choice for a first story to read on here! You're a great writter and I hope you have better luck next time with a job. The only suggestion I have is to proof read, there were alot of simple typos, I'm not really one to talk though. ^.^" |
 BlackTreaderWolf 2009-08-12 . chapter 1nice |
 Apple Cherry Muffins 2009-07-20 . chapter 38Great Job I absoultly loved it... it was amazing |
 Writing4Eternity 2009-07-09 . chapter 38Awesome! I love this story |
 Isabella22 2009-06-23 . chapter 38Nuuoo i'm going to miss this story so much. It was incredible. :( I hope you start another vampire romance story. Maybe if you a do a few of them, you could alternate endings with humans being turned or not. :D Anyhow, I loved this story so much and I wish I could continue to read more. Amazing writing style. Awesome job! |
 East-0f-Eden 2009-06-22 . chapter 38i LOVED the end. I do hope that you do the wedding because i think it would be awesome. Good luck with your job hunting. If it's any comfort it sucks here on the other side of the world too. :) |
 Crimsonlotus 2009-06-22 . chapter 38Amazing ending! |
 Sekhra 2009-06-21 . chapter 38So happy to see you're still around! I found this last chapter pretty satisfying, although the time gaps were a little weird. Little Tristan is a bit creepy! I like him, though. And the ending seems a little unfinished, like you hit pause right before the end of the movie. But on the whole I thought it was a nice wrap up and I'm grateful to finally get some closure! Please tell me you'll be posting other things. I'll keep reading.
xoxo
Sekhra |
 MarloCarlo10 2009-06-21 . chapter 38Ah man it's the end :(
I love this story! I love Rome and Ly!
Well, I love alot of things in this story ;) |
 HaleyAnne 2009-06-21 . chapter 38 another wonderful chapter keep it up |
 bela13 2009-06-21 . chapter 38PUT UP THE CHAPTER ON LY AND ROME'S WEDDING |
 akai-sora 2009-06-21 . chapter 38Aww...over already? Ah well, nothing lasts forever, especially when inspiration dies. n.n
I agree. It's really hard to adequately end a story when, no matter what you do, it doesn't end. And with vampires, it really doesn't end, evil long-lived things that they are.
Hmm...well, interesting ending if nothing else, although I, like other readers I'm sure, would've liked to see a few small pieces of closure in the form of decisions being made, but not bad at all.
Good luck on finding another job and thanks for the long story! n.n |
 Crimsonlotus 2009-05-30 . chapter 37OMG YOU R AN AMAZING WRITER ! I LOVE IT^^...IS THIS THE LAST CHP OR R U GONNA ADD 1 OR 2 MORE...? |
 East-0f-Eden 2009-04-30 . chapter 37I know we're almost at the end of this story. But, I've been waiting a REALLY long time to hear the rest. So will there be more? |