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| MisterScotty 2008-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseM it's been so long since i read this story, i forgot i read the story, then read the first chapter and realized i read it! Just telling you that it's a good story so far...again. :) |
| zomgnessa 2008-07-14 ch 4, | abuseaww, i really like this story =] you should update it sometime soon |
| Feel The Waltz 2008-06-02 ch 4, | abuseAh i do like this so far. I like the fact that Lucas & Nick aren't your steriotypical gay men. Sorry this review doesn't contain anything helpful. More more more plz! :D |
| MisterScotty 2008-05-31 ch 4, | abuseThis is a good story so far. :) |
| plix 2008-05-06 ch 4, anon. | abuselove it! can't wait for more:) |
| gummybaby 2008-05-04 ch 4, | abuseoh I like this. the last part with jimmy was so sad though. Anyways, you're doing a great job, this is a lovely story. |
| Faith Adeline 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abuseThis story has potential. It's good so far :) Just proof-read, because there are some tiny errors. I know how hard it is to catch them all, believe me. Keep it up and update soon! Faith |
| Oriel Kurosaki 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abuseoh, I'm so excited to see what happens next! |
| Oriel Kurosaki 2008-04-13 ch 3, | abuseOh, wow. This is quite good! Your characters are interesting, and easy to relate to, and your word flow is really good. I'm interested in where it's going to go from here! |
| Thecreativewritingstudent 2008-04-13 ch 3, | abuseHm...interesting. Please continue. |
| Thecreativewritingstudent 2008-04-10 ch 2, | abuseThis is really good, very interesting and I'm intrigued. Please update soon! |
| makexmexspin 2008-04-06 ch 2, | abusedeff. good story... so far. keep up with the unraveling of the characters and their lives. it's really good other than a couple of mistakes here and there. : D I HOPE TO SEE MORE! |
| Felix17 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseGood stuff! :):) I'm really enjoying reading so far. Would love to know how it all goes!! I like your characters a lot, well thought about. I was a little confused at first, but I worked it out. Not to be picky, but there were a few little errors, but it could be me just being thick. Somwhere at the beginning it says 'like at a swimming', and I think you meant to put 'pool' on the end of it. And somewhere else near the beginning I noticed you spellt 'clique' and 'clicque'. I don't know what the proper spelling for that is so I thought I'd just point it out and let you know. Otherwise it was great!! :):) Hoping you update because I'll be sure to read it. |
| turtledonkey27 2008-01-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseexcellent start. more, please? |