Amazing story, awesome characters. You should continue with this, it is really good. Update soon! Want to know what happens

I was wondering when you're going to update?

M it's been so long since i read this story, i forgot i read the story, then read the first chapter and realized i read it! Just telling you that it's a good story so far...again. :)

aww, i really like this story =]


you should update it sometime soon

Ah i do like this so far. I like the fact that Lucas & Nick aren't your steriotypical gay men. Sorry this review doesn't contain anything helpful. More more more plz! :D

This is a good story so far. :)

love it! can't wait for more:)

oh I like this. the last part with jimmy was so sad though. Anyways, you're doing a great job, this is a lovely story.

This story has potential. It's good so far :) Just proof-read, because there are some tiny errors. I know how hard it is to catch them all, believe me. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith

oh, I'm so excited to see what happens next!

Oh, wow. This is quite good! Your characters are interesting, and easy to relate to, and your word flow is really good. I'm interested in where it's going to go from here!

Hm...interesting. Please continue.

This is really good, very interesting and I'm intrigued. Please update soon!

deff. good story... so far. keep up with the unraveling of the characters and their lives. it's really good other than a couple of mistakes here and there. : D

I HOPE TO SEE MORE!

Good stuff! :):) I'm really enjoying reading so far. Would love to know how it all goes!! I like your characters a lot, well thought about. I was a little confused at first, but I worked it out. Not to be picky, but there were a few little errors, but it could be me just being thick. Somwhere at the beginning it says 'like at a swimming', and I think you meant to put 'pool' on the end of it. And somewhere else near the beginning I noticed you spellt 'clique' and 'clicque'. I don't know what the proper spelling for that is so I thought I'd just point it out and let you know. Otherwise it was great!! :):) Hoping you update because I'll be sure to read it.