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| Tetelestai 2008-01-31 ch 1,  | abuseThis was really good! Your overall idea connected with me, and I loved the part about how we're all on a stage, acting. Although some of your sentence structure was a little awkward, you write way better than I did when I was 14. =) Good job! P.S. I LOVE Stained Glass Masquerade by Casting Crowns ahaha |
| TheMagicPen 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abusePowerful. Really good short story. 10/10 |