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| dOrKy-GuRl03 2008-06-11 ch 12,  | abusei have to admit..that story was good..too bad that its already finished..man its short..but o well..nice job on the story...looking forward more of your stories...bye..bye... |
| Marisa Gittinger 2008-03-10 ch 13, | abuseAw man! It's over? Sequel? lol This was SO good! Thank YOU! |
| Marisa Gittinger 2008-03-10 ch 12, | abuseAW! YAY! |
| Marisa Gittinger 2008-03-10 ch 11, | abuseAw yay this is gonna be so interesting! |
| Marisa Gittinger 2008-03-10 ch 10, | abuseLOL! This was perfect. |
| Marisa Gittinger 2008-03-10 ch 9, | abuseAW! |
| Riley Hunter 2008-03-10 ch 13, | abusethank YOU for writing this vondeful story! *tear* it's done. but that's sokay. |
| Riley Hunter 2008-03-10 ch 12, | abuseaw. she's a little strange at how she doesn't believe him. But, that's Murphy! |
| Riley Hunter 2008-03-10 ch 11, | abusegood chappie :) |
| Riley Hunter 2008-03-10 ch 9, | abuseaw. cute chapie |
| hypa to hell and back 2008-03-10 ch 13, | abuseaww its so sweet...im review the last two chapter...i love it im upset that its finished can you think off doing an epilogue or some thing:)? |
| CassandraRose526 2008-03-09 ch 13, | abuseThe ending was very abrupt . . . although it did refer to the comment that was made in the beginning. However, I probably wouldn't have realized the story was over, if you didn't add this note. Nevertheless, it was still very cute. Cassandra |
| CassandraRose526 2008-03-09 ch 12, | abuseshe's the one who sounds drunk. |
| CassandraRose526 2008-03-09 ch 11, | abuseThis could turn dastardly . . . |
| CassandraRose526 2008-03-09 ch 10, | abuseshort chapter. Way to raise reader's hopes only to go about crashing them to the ground. |