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Winter Flurry
2008-07-02
ch 6,
abuseAlright. I just went back and read the first and second book again (in the space of an afternoon, too) and I must say, I'm upset. I want MORE now...I was hoping it'd satisfy my craving for more, but it didn't...at all. xD

Hurry up and update, or I'm going to give you hell! After rereading, I made those connections again that made me want more in the first place (I had forgotten half that stuff) and if you don't at least make it look like something will be revealed soon I'll pester you until it does! :)

You will finish this book if I have to force you to, lol! I just have to figure out how...besides pestering.

Though, thank you for being the only story to update out of the dozen I was reading...No one seems to remember that they left me hanging! xS

~WF
Moonlite Star
2008-06-08
ch 6,
abuselol loved keziah this chapter. Her frustration in teaching them was just amusing! and imaginably quite painful for her. Curious what the bits in the beginning were about with the government.

Looking forward to hearing what's happening to Kiv...and Keziah's eventual meet with Dann.

Update ASAP! :)
Dani P
2008-04-13
ch 5,
abusefinally! more to the story.
as usual wicked good and can't wait for more!
Moonlite Star
2008-04-11
ch 5,
abuseoh man...that just sucks. poor kiv...

as for keziah...hmm her life's getting pretty interesting. I like Tam's character, heh.

can't wait for the next update! :) Great job!
leo the llama
2008-04-10
ch 5,
abuseOh no! poor Kiv...
I'm curious to see what will happen, though!
Definitely looking forward to the next update

--leo
leo the llama
2008-03-02
ch 4,
abuseOh no! That's cruel using Keziah against Kiv...
But a well written chapter, nonetheless! Sorry it took so long for me to get around to reading it. I've been away all week...
But! well written as usual, and definitely looking forward to the next chapter

--leo
Moonlite Star
2008-02-26
ch 4,
abuseGreat chapter.

I think my only disappointment is that they intend to use Keziah against him, which is what Kiv feared to begin with, but if that's the only way...then it's understandable. Sucks to be in Kiv's spot.

Update asap.
Dachande663-ff
2008-02-26
ch 4,
abuseWow, I'm sorry it's taken me this long to get around to reading and reviewing this. This story's looking like it's going to be better than ever, I can't wait to see where you take the plot. Hope you carry on updating!
leo the llama
2008-02-05
ch 3,
abuseAh! yay for Kiv still finding it in him to fight!
Moonlite Star
2008-02-03
ch 3,
abuseI liked that you recapped on everything since the first story. It's easy to forget the details of the Academy.

I remember when I read the first book, I didn't know the age of admittance into the Academy. It may have been I just didn't read carefully enough, but I never knew what age Keziah was.

Kiv - I hope you write more about his story next chapter. I'm...curious about the people he's with.

Tam...I think his character's interesting...and I wonder what will come of their relationship.

I definitely like how this year is starting out...more so than the previous years, for some reason. Can't wait for an update! :)
leo the llama
2008-01-16
ch 2,
abuseAh! a new enemy for Kaziah... another rough year on the horizon? and I feel bad for Kiv...He's just so...bleh.
Alas! but looking forward to next update!

--leo
Moonlite Star
2008-01-15
ch 2,
abuselove the chapter. :D can't wait for an update...and curious to see what happens with kiv more than kez, for some reason...

although i think both character's lives are going to be an interesting read!
Moonlite Star
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseoo, you're back! hmm can't wait to read more. was a bit disappointed it was so short!

update asap. :)
Vorserkeien
2008-01-02
ch 1, anon.
abuse:D & we begin the final book at last, in it's usual brilliant way!
BTW need me beta-ing again? (Oh & we need to meet up again at some point ;)!)
~Me~:P
leo the llama
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseWelcome back! I missed you haha
Amazing start to this book! It was awesome. The assassin guy sounds really cool. -nod nod-
Always looking forward to the next update!

--leo
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