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| Johannas mirror 2008-03-14 ch 1,  | abuseTe amo because your poetry transcends so many boundries and speaks to the quiet poet inside of me ripping open wounds that i never recieved but none-the-less feel when your words roll over me |
| Scribe Of All Trades 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abuseLove the raw emotion and imagery in this. |
| Lady Fingers 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuse**-thats all i can say. really good never stop feeding your feeling into your words |
| epsilon103 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseI like this its very powerfull It just is so angry The sware words actually fit in the poem and it feels like a new universe being created in the confines of the shower and her pain |
| creepy kiss on tuesday 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abusePowerful shower. So far, I really like your work. You take something small and put so many forceful words into it that it feels like a universe in a second. And I guess that's me being way to dramatic? Sorry. |
| Unknown Survivor 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseHmm...the emotion was well portrayed, but I felt that the swear words sorta took away from it just a bit. But overall nice work here. ~Unknown Survivor~ |
| soliloquium 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abusei liked it. alot. for once, the swear words actually fit in the mood of the poem-- adding to its brutal, rock-hard meaning. GO PURPLE EYELINER. =DD mth |
| losing gracie girl 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abusei really like the mood of this poem. it makes me wonder at what could cause someone so much pain. great job! yours until the wind changes, Lost |
| EyesEmphatic 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. Powerful & brutally honest. Good job. |