This story just continues to amaze me. I love every bit of it! I hope to read more soon :)

~Carm~

I honestly did miss you. I have a big obsession with names. I think the name means a lot to the character and whe I saw you used pseudonimes I was exulting. What I think is missing, probably in character development, is that they don't an interior conflict anymore. I would like to see more of their thoughts and opinions; at least the easy going characater's thoughts.

Fantastic job on this chapter. Absolute genius :) Can't wait for more!

~Carm~

this is superb! I want more of this amazing story, please...

keep it up and update soon

Wow, nice chapter! didn't expect that coming... update ASAP!

wow, nice chapter. update asap!

Wow this chapter was all police novel like, and finally some answers! Because questions are of a dozen.I miss Devil, but I'm glad Cobweb came back this chapter! I have this image of Cobweb into my mind like a cute laprechaun, maybe because of the character and Midsummer Night's Dream. I'm glad that we'll finally get some answers...

The exposition of one's story must be very well defined so that the story could be logic, it's even more important than the intrigue(twist). You can't understand the twist or even consider it the twist when you don't know the exposition. so it's too early to say that the story is not going in any kind of direction.

Well, I'll be damned...she wears Devil's necklace, but she sleeps with Lusien close to his tomb stone. Poor Devil is now turning in his grave. At least I'm glad that these "meetings" with Lusien don't affect her life as a huntress, well not yet.

Hahahahah, nice chapter! update asap!

hi =) Glad that you are finally updating. what i notice from the previous story is that the twist came far too early in the story.. seems like you could add a little bit more suspense before it gets to the climax or something =)

looking forward to your next update =)

Well there's nothing like the first book. It's all the time this way, but I am still enthusiastic and optimistic about it. Agile totally creeps me out, she is much more dangerous than I thought. It amazes me that she's so calm after Devil's death, you do have a way with your charaters, I still have much to learn. I'd like to see more of the other characters, too. I really like Cobweb and Blaze, believe...yeah they are funny.

Their arguing is pretty funny, yeah! nice chapter, update ASAP!

I like the story and Agile is an interesting character. Can't wait for the next chapter!

nice nice start from your second part from the series :D update soon!