this poem is rather interesting, I like the ending a lot, it's
great. :)

it seems like it's about a child or a lover, but I'm not sure... though I love this part a lot as well, "Those violet eyes filled with so much pain, close them against the chaos." It sounds so cool :D lol good job.

Aww, that's so sweet! I'm having a "KYA KAWAI!11!!" moment, how embarrassing.

I really love what you've done here. Great job! You should be proud of it :D