This story's very cool, I can't wait for the next chapter!

This really is a terrific story. The writing itself, and the use of words makes me laugh, and the plot went from strange to suspenseful to funny. please, please write more?

:O I have a question, Is Fox gonna just follow her around or is he and Sally going to do something amazing or something... =] He sounds amazing Btw!

OMG! thats my birthday too! May 26th =] good STory soo far... I really am wondering whats with Fox and all

This is interesting...It's almost written like a manga. Cool. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love Fox!! He is so cute!

Please continue!

millie xx

Wow. Fox is so... naive. I mean, I know why, and I get it and all, it's just... weird. Especially for Sally!

Tell me if I'm right... but Sally's great-grandma (I think it's her great-grandma, the one who doesn't talk) is also named Sally and was the one who Fox knew and LOVED! and she was supposed to come and release him, but on the way there or from a midnight rendevouz, she was involved in a TERRIBLE accident which scrambled her brains and made her unable to remember, or unable to get back to Fox...

Yeah. That's my theory. In one humongo (humoungo?) run-on sentence.



Also, this is kind of weird, but do you have a sister/cousin named Sarah? I saw in Trick you signed Skylar Moore... and you're from Iowa... Sarah would now live in Omaha, NE, like me, and she would be a freshman... it would make sense if you lived in Council Bluffs... I don't know. I'm probably wrong anyways... whatevs.


Can't wait for the next chapter!

I have to congratulate you for this story!

At first it was the mystery behind the source of the voice that drove me into reading this. Sally's journey to the countryside was like a returning to the old days and adding a michievous trickster to the plot was brilliant!

It reminds us of those old tales, full of a polished dangerous glint which charms anyone who hears it. The choice for a kitsune spirit like Fox that reveals itself not evil, as many of the town's people thought, but naive, cheerful and childish is certainly a major conquer. Fox became irresistible: if not prepared he could easily steal your heart away - Fox's a character that grows on you countermeasured by the cool intelligence of Sally.

Loved it* Nessya

Carnage ahead? ._. Oh boy.

Very fun to read. Honestly, I feel like I'm reading manga. I see this playing out as anime scenes in my head.
I love how emotional Fox is. He's adorable XD.

I'm reviewing already woman! You've turned me into another one of your drooling fans darn you!

Getting a new fan aside, I liked this chapter lots! Again good characters, Fox is adorable and endearing and yet he stays true to his trickster character despite the new development of a conscience. You executed it great! Sally's good too, she's got good motivations and a realistic attitude about this situation. Only question I have, is why do you sometimes use commas on one line dialogue without any indicators of 'he said' or 'she said' or something?

Now, praise aside I will now join the masses in hungrily clawing at you for updates. :)

Okay...something tells me the changing eye color is an obvious hint, the in my blood thing seems like a hint too and Donny is more than he appears! Salem is adorable, Chang is himself, and Mr. Fox is both adorable and strange at the same time. I'm liking this lots! Good characters, good dialogue, and only a few stylistic describing thingys that make the nitpicky editor in me go crazy. Story is excellent.

coolness!! now I'm up to date with this story! my computer's been a mess and I haven't gotten a chance to read this!! I look forward to more updates!

*happy dance* you updated! yey~

i think it would be adorable to have Fox be all clingy when some guys start flirting with her, and be like "she likes ME more!". rofl. some chapter or another, t'would be hilarious. hehehe

i look forward to your next update!

~maru

She shouldn't have taken the beads. I have a bad feeling about them.

I like the beginning. It hooked me.