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| Lady Katreina 2008-09-14 ch 1,  | abuseIt would be the stutter... partially... Thank you for this story, very cute. |
| x3life 2008-08-30 ch 1, | abuseaw how cute!! =) |
| Lily Llynn 2008-08-29 ch 1, | abuseThe summary is actually a bit misleading, but the oneshot as a whole is cute. (: Well-written, funny, bunch of chemistry, excellent oneshot. (: I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (: |
| anitsirK 2008-08-29 ch 1, | abuseCute :) Hahaha... |
| stunninglyaverage 2008-08-28 ch 1, | abuseHaha. That was really cute. Nice job. :D |
| Camelia Sinensis 2008-08-28 ch 1, | abuseNo, his AMAZING good looks? Pff...who cares. Lol, this was brilliant! I loved it to bits. It managed to be sweet & simple & very funny, which is a pretty damn good combo. A favorite already. ;) |
| granma45 2008-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuse*grins* cute! that is so cute |
| romance at short notice. 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusebahaha i loved it. especially the line "...and I noticed his bottom teeth weren't completely straight, almost like he'd had braces, but rebelled against the retainer after a while." because that's EXACTLY what i've been doing for the past year and a half. >) it was extremely well-written with just the right amount of humor to make it funny, but still kept the sweet & romantic undertone to it. (if there's anything romantic about feminine products & old ladies with bladder problems, anyway.) i'll be watching for updates! :D keep on writing, r@sn p.s. it's not that big of a deal, but you accidently switched the younger sisters' preferences from the shopping list to the actual sentence discribing Laurie grabbing them. just thought i'd let you know, because i always want people to tell me these things. :) |
| LovelyxXxDreams 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI Loved it! Reminds me of a very brief romance my best friend had with a guy at her favorite publix! Actually, it wasn't really a romance...it was more of the staring at eachother...but either way! |
| Enaid 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abusehaha i liked this one the whole tampon isle thing... i agree with Laurie. i dont see a difference between pads and tmpons although some of my friends r like tampons scare me lol |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseVery cute story. I've experienced somethin similar to this except it was reversed. No complaints, well written. |
| pretentious fXXX 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseits not very important...but couldnt resist...at the start of the story its Nikki using pads and Chloe the tampons and midway through it switches to the other way round... like I said its not very important but still... |
| Lyrical Lady 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abusethis story is so cute |
| saranna 2008-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseso cute! I love it! |
| DarkSweetRose 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseaw tat was te sweetiest one shot. i acutally loved it. the guy sounded soo cute. and how he didn't see her coming aha. finaly they managed to talk and how he ran after her was the cutest thing. loved it. good job! |