Awwww this is so cute! I LOVED it! I do this ahaha I go shopping with my mum to see the guy who works on the till there aha but I think he has left now :(

This was great though :)

Awwww this is so cute! I LOVED it! I do this ahaha I go shopping with my mum to see the guy who works on the till there aha but I think he has left now :(

This was great though :)

haha so funny it was cute that they met in the tampon section soo funny and i loved it

I feel so embarrassed when I get caught looking at someone haha. And I'm usually with my mom too. So I just bring up some random thing to my mom in viet haha.

I used to be okay buying those stuff, but somehow my mom always goes to a guy cashier and I feel so self conscious about it.

Love the story!

*Ngoc1231*

pretty good, i like your story. (: maybe you could read mine and give me comments? just go to my page and click on my story . thx!

absolutely. AH-DORABLE. :]

made my day (:

Aw! So cute. I loved Laurie and Noah...they had great chemistry. And great names, by the way. :)

It would be the stutter... partially...

Thank you for this story, very cute.

aw how cute! )

The summary is actually a bit misleading, but the oneshot as a whole is cute. (: Well-written, funny, bunch of chemistry, excellent oneshot. (: I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (:

Cute :) Hahaha...

Haha. That was really cute. Nice job. :D

No, his AMAZING good looks? Pff...who cares.

Lol, this was brilliant! I loved it to bits. It managed to be sweet & simple & very funny, which is a pretty damn good combo.

A favorite already. ;)

*grins* cute! that is so cute

bahaha i loved it. especially the line "...and I noticed his bottom teeth weren't completely straight, almost like he'd had braces, but rebelled against the retainer after a while." because that's EXACTLY what i've been doing for the past year and a half. )

it was extremely well-written with just the right amount of humor to make it funny, but still kept the sweet & romantic undertone to it. (if there's anything romantic about feminine products & old ladies with bladder problems, anyway.)

i'll be watching for updates! :D keep on writing,

r sn

p.s. it's not that big of a deal, but you accidently switched the younger sisters' preferences from the shopping list to the actual sentence discribing Laurie grabbing them. just thought i'd let you know, because i always want people to tell me these things. :)