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| Beka 2008-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy entire review didn't show up (I'm joyfulsoul). What I was going to say was, those lines are brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. This is my favorite by far. I would say keep up the amazing work, but you're just plain amazing, and everything you write is or will be a beautiful work of art no matter what. You are a true poet. |
| joyful-soul3 2008-06-30 ch 1,  | abuseThink of why. Think of why this person, This someone cares enough about you to help and how much you want that respect to last. |
| Ildri 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseyou, angus my friend, are brilliant. BRILLIANT i say! i love it! |
| undescribableMONiiCA. 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseIt seemed like you were writing a list of commants. "dont lie" "don't blow up" "think of why" "stop!" My fav parts were the 1st verse and the last one. Like I said i felt like I was being commanded to do things all in the middle of the poem. |