Interesting... I'm really liking this.

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theres no capitals! yes, hahah
i like it

I like this story so far. Do continue!

i like it! just as a suggestion use proper punctuation, like capital letters and that...it increases the quality of the writing=P and no, i'm not being hyprictical, i just don't use capitals in reviews for some strange reason=P

but yeh, i really like this and i hope it continues!=D

~Lady Rai xx