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| torn pieces 2008-02-24 ch 1,  | abuseEverything seems unkind but It’s you I urge to keep So I wait here in the hope That we can see eye to eye -This poem has so much emotion in it, I love it. Keep writing, you are a true poet. ;) |
| Camilleta 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThe last 2 lines are especially good. "In doubt you’re minds on me" should be your, I think. |
| lookin4nemo 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh this i swonderful but very sad...keep it up and i can't wait to read more!=) |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| pinkxbullets 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is really, really good. I can definitely relate to it. awesome job ^^ ~Gigi also, thank you for the review |
| Duck Faery 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. You're a really great poet. You have beautiful vivid imagery, nice rhthym that doesn't destract or annoy, rhymes that add so much. . . wow. impressed, Duck Faery |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseYou are an amazing writer! This is awesome, maybe my favorite so far! |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseHey Devil above, i'd reply but you're on anonymous. In a way it is based on some real life events, and it's sad that we can relate. Thanks for reading. |
| EyesEmphatic 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is amazing writing. Great job. |
| Devil's_Snare_890 2008-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow this is sad. I can really relate. This based on real life events or what? Hit back xoxo |