Everything seems unkind but

It’s you I urge to keep

So I wait here in the hope

That we can see eye to eye

-This poem has so much emotion in it, I love it. Keep writing, you are a true poet. ;)

The last 2 lines are especially good.

"In doubt you’re minds on me" should be your, I think.

oh my gosh this i swonderful but very sad...keep it up and i can't wait to read more!=)

Great poem.

~Twilight Starr~

This is really, really good. I can definitely relate to it. awesome job ^^

~Gigi
also, thank you for the review

Wow. You're a really great poet. You have beautiful vivid imagery, nice rhthym that doesn't destract or annoy, rhymes that add so much. . . wow.
impressed,
Duck Faery

You are an amazing writer! This is awesome, maybe my favorite so far!

Hey Devil above, i'd reply but you're on anonymous.
In a way it is based on some real life events, and it's sad that we can relate. Thanks for reading.

Wow. This is amazing writing. Great job.

Wow this is sad. I can really relate. This based on real life events or what?

Hit back
xoxo