I really like your style of writing in this! its really unique. and i really cant find anything that you can improve on, so great job on it. It was really nice :)

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fulness, depth and abundance... fullness

I like this piece... I love how it takes such a turn in the middle.. I wasn't expecting it, but it was great how you basically answered all your questions... the flow is really interesting too with the insanely short lines... I also really like the dark, light imagery and the box idea.. nice piece

Can't say that I agree with you on the matter of God, but I do think you are a talented poet. The fourth stanza was well crafted: the formation was intentional and succinct. Even a pagan like me can appreciate your talent. Keep it up!

Very nicely put, and I love the simplicity of the fourth stanza. Poetry is interesting in the way the physical words themselves can shape pictures or imply feelings like that :)

That's very well written!