I love your imagery. I don't understand the poem- but I love it for the fact.

I loved this. It is so poetically written, deliberately cryptic, almost teasingly so. In my opinion, this is talking about the dawning of a new day, a sunrise if you will, and a really good way of describing it. I love the title, it goes well with your pen name as well, which is a really wonderful line from the ever fabulous Ms Dickinson. It seems this poem sorts of do a homage to her, a pretty good one at that.

I don't understand... *Sigh* but I did enjoy the use of metaphors. I love metaphors.

Lots of images that I love, as always... Please, never stop writing!

you know I love you... do you want more praise? This is wonderful, like usual ;)

strong images, all of them confusing, and I have a headache and don't feel like reading into what you've written - no offense, I just can't think straight today for some reason.

best of luck