I don't understand... *Sigh* but I did enjoy the use of metaphors. I love metaphors. ^^

Lots of images that I love, as always... Please, never stop writing!^^

you know I love you... do you want more praise? This is wonderful, like usual ;)

strong images, all of them confusing, and I have a headache and don't feel like reading into what you've written - no offense, I just can't think straight today for some reason.
best of luck