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| jekodama 2008-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseNice! Weird way to meet someone, huh? running away from the cops... So Kip... Well, with a name like that I wouldn't like him either. And WHY is Roxanne's hair pink? Big balls of fluff are nice. I wish I knew the story in between each chapter. A grammar check is definitely in order. I'm sorry to be so annoying with this, but no writer is worth it if they don't use proper grammar. And yes, I realize that there are like three persons in the whole wide world that use a perfect grammar, but we should try to be like them. Well, that's enough. I'm becoming increasingly annoying with my Grammar Whip, I know! But at least I'm polite about it, am I not? XD Toodles! |
| Love.Slowly.Kills 2008-01-21 ch 3, | abuseSO CUTE!! and since when is a ball of fluff bad? MORE! |
| SnowsxBitterxHeart 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, I am soo glad that you went with Roxanne and Scott. I thought those two were cute together. ^^ I loved how they met. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I bet it's going to be good. So update soon. Great job. *Snow |