Oh, I like this one too. And you've got some sexy langauge in here, too.

I liked it. The rhyme scheme is surprisingly unforced. It just sounds, like, casual ... for people who can talk in poetry ... nevermind I'm a poetry idiot. But I like the poem a lot!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon

Find your self a man,.. yourself

I love how you bold that last word... its a sad and unfortunately very true story... the piece makes a great point and is well written.. the only thing is in the second stanza it seems like you added yea just because you were desperate to make it rhyme.. other than that awesome job

Great poem! Very powerful, very well written. Awesome.

Wow! that was pretty good.. I really enjoyed reading it :) the rhyme and four-verse stanzas reminded me of a ballad, even because its set in the middle ages (one of my favourite periods of history). I love the last verse and the way you highlight the word decided; it really puts into stark and naked clarity the whole situation and leaves you with that particular feeling of uneasiness but at the same time thankful I'm not in her situation lol .. well anyways very well-written and well done! :)

Lovely! =D

I love the fact that you made this rhyme. There are too few people who actually make rhyming poems, in my opinion.

I love the fact that this poem tells a story. It's a fresh idea, too, to make a poem about.

I don't know what else to say except that I really like this. =) *favorite*