"Kathryn wanted to die right there on New York’s uncomfortably hot sidewalk then and their, rather than face his wrath."
- their should be there

“Hmm. I guess in it’s own way it is. You dart me with ice-cream, and I steal your iPod. Fait enough for you,”
- Fait i believe should be Fair

Just thought I'd point it out. Love the story!

- Dreamer

cute!

-giggle- I knew there was a reason I enjoyed icecream. XD

very cute!

-toffeecakesxox. :)

This is so sweet (no pun intended)! I loved it!

Only most of the world? I'm ashamed...:) That was an awesome one-shot! I absolutely loved it...though i would like to know how old Kathryn is. The description was fantastic, and the characters were very well developed. Good job! :)

very sweet. Oh and pinkamoo sent me.

He-he! That was so cute! "That damn sweet-tooth of mine!" that's cute!

That was absolutely fluffy! It was a great read!

Aw!
Really good plot and a really good read!

oh my gosh this was such a cute story! exactly what i was looking to read right now

Aw, I want chocolate kisses, kind of combines some of the worlds finer points doesn't it? Anyways, your story is brilliant, good job!

Very cute. I liked the plot, which was what kept me reading since the grammar/spelling was a bit rough. Think the major mistake was saying higher instead of hire. Oh, and the Meyer/Morton thing, so which is her last name? And Kit-Kat can be a lot of things, not just Kathryn, so he shouldn't have been able to assume Kathryn from Kit-Kat. And the sentence right after you said Gabriel was drop dead gorgeous...you said Kathryn wanted to die right there...on the sidewalk then and their...first of all, the 2nd their should've been there, but it doesn't make sense to have the 2nd there there. Just little mistakes here and there, nothing big. :)

I liked it. Cute.

aww this was really cute!! =) i enjoyed reading it

oh gosh i want a gabriel he just seems like the perfect man. if only he were real **sighs** a girl can only dream or read haha great story :)