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| blackbubbleblue 2008-08-17 ch 1,  | abusevery sweet. Oh and pinkamoo sent me. |
| .Undecided.And.Confused. 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseHe-he! That was so cute! "That damn sweet-tooth of mine!" that's cute! |
| Glenalek 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely fluffy! It was a great read! |
| starlit x sky 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseAw! Really good plot and a really good read! |
| Irish Elf128 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh this was such a cute story! exactly what i was looking to read right now |
| Pinkamoo 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseAw, I want chocolate kisses, kind of combines some of the worlds finer points doesn't it? Anyways, your story is brilliant, good job! |
| Icyglaze 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. I liked the plot, which was what kept me reading since the grammar/spelling was a bit rough. Think the major mistake was saying higher instead of hire. Oh, and the Meyer/Morton thing, so which is her last name? And Kit-Kat can be a lot of things, not just Kathryn, so he shouldn't have been able to assume Kathryn from Kit-Kat. And the sentence right after you said Gabriel was drop dead gorgeous...you said Kathryn wanted to die right there...on the sidewalk then and their...first of all, the 2nd their should've been there, but it doesn't make sense to have the 2nd there there. Just little mistakes here and there, nothing big. :) |
| TheFinalCountdown 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Cute. |
| x3life 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseaww this was really cute!! =) i enjoyed reading it |
| Laughing Facade 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseoh gosh i want a gabriel he just seems like the perfect man. if only he were real **sighs** a girl can only dream or read haha great story :) |
| SnowsxBitterxHeart 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was so sweet. Heh, no pun intended. But, seriously I enjoyed this little tale of yours. It was good. ^_^ Great job. *Snow |
| katie valentine 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abusedidn't understand the end part, but its okay. i still think its sweet! :D |
| The Shadows' Sunrise 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseThank you so much for writing this, though I am a bit surprised I must say. When I was talking to you I thought you had your heart set on a chapter one-shot. I am obsessed with fluff i must say. =] It is such a cute story,though. I love it. T.S.S. |
| Lily Llynn 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseCute! A few inconsistencies, like how Meyer became Morton, and also how Kat automatically is assumed to be Kathryn (it could be a lot of other names, like Katie, or the other Katherine). But other than that, pretty good writing. (: I'd also like to know what happened to her iPod. XD A lovely addition from clumsy eloQuence 6 to our c2. (: |
| fortuneismymuse 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseSo cute. :) |