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| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-03-16 ch 3,  | abusei resent that comment, you stupid little bi-otch! not all natural blondes are dumb thankyou very much! and seriously, how could she favor "like" over hot guys with WAY hot peircings. especially when Drake look so yummy! **licks lips** |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-03-16 ch 2, | abuseuh, anger manegment much? |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abusecough sk8r boi cough. sorry, really bad cold |
| eclipse-of-the-suns 2008-02-20 ch 3, | abusehey hey person good story so far i like it so cool, keepupdating yeah over and out |
| phelps112 2008-02-05 ch 3, | abusehmm, so she's hiding her true self, could be an interesting story. can't wait to read more. |
| Syl Gordon 2008-01-30 ch 3, | abuseI'm liking your writing style. I'm so amused by how obvious it is that she's faking it, but none of the cronies notice... This is the first review I've ever written... So sorry it(as in the review) sucks... |
| eating staples 2008-01-28 ch 3, | abuseYes, I am jelous over her guitars. Gauger... snickers. Yay I get a COOKIE! You should really read over your chapter before posting it, the grammar errors can get a little distracting. Otherwis, yay I get a COOKIE!! |
| Silver Brook 2008-01-26 ch 3, | abuseYAY you updated ! Update again son ! this was a great chapter...please write another one soon ! |
| Riley Hunter 2008-01-26 ch 3, | abusegood chappie. i like drake a lot. anyways. update soon |
| CarnivalGirl346 2008-01-26 ch 3, | abuseI'm sorry i havent reviewed any of your chapters. Been to busy. BUt now that i have read all thre of them I can review. AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME! (TO THE TUNE OF THE LIMBO:) |
| Baby-Mama-9873324 2008-01-26 ch 3, | abuseWhere's my COOKIE |
| lovelesskisses 2008-01-26 ch 3, | abuseOMG!! I love it =] I can't wait to read more. |
| FadeToBlack 2008-01-26 ch 3, | abuseokay so i was a little skeptical when i saw the title, because 'punk' is so commonly used to describe people who aren't punk. but your story has some serious potential. A couple things though, reread your chapters for capitalization. There are a few names (drake and skull) that are continually uncapitalized. And when you were saying who was at the top of the pyramid, and who Skull was, even though it was obvious, were really long and drawn out. It's good to ask a question like, "Guess who it was?" but it took really long to actually answer it and move on. wow, this is the longest review i've written, but i think that this story has some serious potential. so update soon, okay, F2B |
| Dandelion Cupcakes 2008-01-26 ch 3, | abusewow i really like this chapter and i like where this whole story is going :] please keep writing, I need to know what happens next |
| Silver Brook 2008-01-19 ch 2, | abuseplease update soon this story is sounding rather intresting ! |