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| Moondog Dozier 2008-01-07 ch 1,  | abuseMarvelously ambiguous and decipherable. Leaves the reader seeking their own meaning. Well written haiku. |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseinteresting... I like it a lot |
| Basara 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuserevolving on the matter in different prospects yet in the same sphere... nice... |
| xDancingintheRainx 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this. I found that the meaning was difficult to grasp, but I like poetry that can be interpreted in different ways. It definitely takes talent to get so few words to have as much impact as you did here. Nicely done. |
| Lisa98 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abusehm. : ) i like how it is short and sweet. |
| Julius Gillian 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThis poem reminds me of Buddhist philosophy that everything in appearance is due to cause and effects. Without this kind of interpretation I don't know how I would view this haiku in a positive manner. I like this because it defines how when things are defined, redefined, and theorized over again we have new information,but information that will be recaptured by new ages and just learnt from scratch all over again. Little do they know that what they know is past information which they're building onto stuff. This is a very optimistic poem to me because it shows 'progress', yet life runs in a cyclictic manner. So is there nothing new under the sun? Well sure there is, but what I'm getting at is knowledge is ever changing and not like static where what we see is (all) what we get. Good haiku. |
| Princess-anna57 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseGood haiku! :) Keep writing. ~Anna~ ^_^ |