Pretty interesting topic.

I have a suggestion for your sources. To make it neater, you can recognize places in which multiple facts come from the same source. Then instead of writing the same source after every sentence, you make it neater, thus making the transition more smooth.

For example, in the sixth and eight paragraph, every single fact comes from a single source. so, why not site the source at the end of the paragraph instead of after every sentence?

I am only mentioning it because, when I read it, it seemed a bit jarring. However, I’m sure you’re aware that I’m practically ADD and can get distracted by pretty much anything.

(PS. Don‘t feel too bad about the procrastination. Knowing me, I probably would have done it the night before. :p)