this is the worst ** script in history what da hell were u thinkin it didnt even make any sense damn!

Very creative. Very good message, too, I really like it. The first scene is a little confusing because I wasn't sure if the lights dimmed and came back up at the restart or if the lights were never on at all.
But otherwise wonderful. n_n

great work! i loved the humor in this. the part where they talk about Laura's relatives is my favorite one.