Awh I'm so sad that you're cancelling it, but I totally respect it. I guess it was going nowhere, but it was still amazingly well-written and just well an overall amazing store :]

You shouldn't take it down--just stop writing and leave it up so others will have a chance to read this great story and you can look back on this :)

No! That's so sad. But understandable. I hope you finish it and repost. At any rate, this chapter was incredibly funny, though why you had to end (forever?) on a cliffhanger is incredibly sad...

YOUR BACK!

its been a ridiculously long wait. i went all shakespearean on your ** for a few days in mourning.

i was all... WHERE ART THOUU SWEET STORYY OF ..THOU! I MISS THEE.

So im not so good at the whole era of shakespeare. eh you win some ya lose some.

ANYHOODLES, the story cracked me up like always! it was freakin hilarious! Pluss i was watchin Caddyshack and it was the part where someone took a ** in the pool and it was floatin around and someone finally saw it annd the Jaws music came on and people scattered like crazy. phew. funy.

anywayy im gonna be super sad that the story isnt gonna be.. written anylonger.. like ill go all into mourning again.. but for a different reason obviously.

but anyway, make sure to msg me or let me know if ya post something..or decide to redo the whole shebang.. etc.etc.. cuz i really love the story.. :( well im gonna go cry me a river now, ILL MISS IT! and you. maybe. *winks suggestivly* J/K!

My boat doesnt float in THAT direction. if ya get my meaninn..

ROAR. okay im done i think..

*turns on Justin Timberlakes, Cry Me a River"

lol Jet's such a typical guy :D but we all love him for it! good chapter and will we be finding out soon who messed up her house? 0.o update again soon!

this story was soo good!! whyy?

but yeah i get it though. one of my older stories, i reread it after i finished it and edited it soo much. i realized how bad it truly was so now, it's basically a different story...

hopefully you'll keep writing this eventually and i'll probably end up reading your other stuff cause your writing style is pretty damned awesome.

keep it up!

wow... great chapter. i thought she really was admitting that she was gay xP because i scrolled down and that was the last thing on the page. that scared the shxt out of me actually xD so thatnks for making her joking=] loveit... update SOON

YOU USED THE UMBRELLA LINE! AH! :D

Anyway, I'm now sad...but still. I'm helping you go over it again, remember? :) So don't despair fans, it may be up again someday! :)

haha.
what maintenance?!?!?! they need no maintenance! they just have to give people (like us) brains! where's the need for maintenance in that?! i think it's a conspiracy... they're trying to make us crazy... we should riot!

who IS the vandalizor?! i wanna kick their patooy to the moon!
if it's britany i'll jump over to said moon and kick it to venus or some distant planet like that...

i like brandon, he's a lil creepy, that's hilarious! (dude, you've gotta get some character pics... or do you already have them? cuz if you do... um... my bad hehe)

HOLY CRAP! I checked if this was updated but I didn't really expect for you to update SNAM! (ha) and this so close together! Imagine my gleeful surprise when I find it is indeed updated. It's more like I did a little jig, possibly the cotton-eye-joe, on the spot and made my brother worry for my sanity.

And it was awesome! I forgot how much I adore Jet. He's so...adorable. And hot. Switching back and forth between Seth and Jet is hard, cause it's difficult to figure out which one is hotter. His confusion about her not having sex with him was so cute. Makes me want to go 'aw' again, but more drawn out than last time.

"Only I would get attacked by a pregnant lady for Chinese food." Best. Line. Ever. I can just imagine her screaming that out of nowhere to some random person and them edging away slowly. The cops reaction to her was HILARIOUS. Seriously, sometimes Emma just slays me. I'm pretty sure I almost punctured a lung laughing at that whole part. Pretty much the whole chapter. Or the whole story now that I think about it.

But what is this about you removing Guitar Lessons?! *long, never-ending Obi-Wan style no as I fall to my knees and shake my fists at the sky* I know what you mean though, about reading back through your stuff and wondering what you were thinking. I do that all the time. I remember the Bittersweet days; when I wrote that then reread it I was like 'what? why?' So I'm super SUPER sad that you're taking it down. I'll miss Jet *wipes away a tear* but I can hope that you'll put it back up sometime. Angst, angst, angst...but I still have SNAM and Seth to look forward to! Yay!

Jet totally seemed creepy in this chapter! And Emma was just as weird as always.

Well... sad to see that you are taking the story down, but I can understand wanting to do some revision. Good luck with that!

No! That's SO sad! Oh well, I hope you have better luck with your other stories then...And I hope you will continue thsi one eventually!

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO N.O NO!
YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO DO THIS TO ME!
*Death Glare*
I hate you.
Why did you have to taunt me?
Write a chapter and stuff and tell me your going to take it down?
WHY?
I HATE YOU SO FRIKKEN MUCH!
._.

wh-wh-wha?
no. You're toying with my mind. :(

i'm sad now! :(

OMIGOSH!!
this was such a fantastic chapter! i cant wait for 13!!

and yess i read your stories in the showerxD you se it take sme about an hour to wash my hair and i just print out your stories (1-centinmeter margins, font 7, singlespaced)--i also do this to other stories--stick it on the wet shower glass wall,and read it while i was my hair and whatnotxD i read ch 12 in the shower too! haha. woww i loved this.i wouldve read it before but dangg i dunno why i did. i simply cant wait for ch 13.IM EXCITED!!


and no i wont stop staring stupidly at guys]:< thats what theyre made for! so we could STARE AT THEM AND DROL

LOL This is so cute! Emma is such a crack head. haha I love the internal banter in her mind. And: "Naked, haha." I laughed EVERY SINGLE TIME you wrote that.

Consider me very amused. ;D