| Reviews for Try Again |
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runswithvamp 6/22/09 . chapter 3i totally guessed his last name was going to be greene |
Language Lover 2/13/09 . chapter 18I can't believe that this is where it ends. There should be a sequel. I hope so. I feel bad for poor Ty. |
shiftblue 5/20/08 . chapter 18/ I feel like there's too much left unexplained still. Why did Natalie identify Ty as her rapist if he'd never seen her before? And who was it, if Ty was innocent? I wish the two had met somewhere in the story. Other than that, it was pretty cute. I kind of felt that Tyler and Destry's relationship moved too fast, but it was still enjoyable. |
Parchment Quill 5/10/08 . chapter 18Nice ending. And a nice story too. All the drama finally over in a nice, sappy ending. Glad that those two are finally together again. |
Jazzisabatmanfan 5/9/08 . chapter 18This was a great story. Awesome job. XD |
Helizabeth 5/9/08 . chapter 18a! it's finished! i loved it! completely loved it! and that wasn't too corny! though i am a sucker for corny romantic shit. |
blackberrydream 4/29/08 . chapter 17This is a nice story, it has good characters and a good plot. The writing could be better though, There were a few grammer and spelling mistakes throughout this story but other than that, it's good. Very emotional! Can't wait to read more. |
Parchment Quill 4/25/08 . chapter 17Interesting chapter. Destry's sister seemed a little too cool with it all though. Anyways, update soon, I want to see what is going to happen between Destry and Tyler. |
Helizabeth 4/24/08 . chapter 17yay! do i start every review like that? i don't mean to be boring, but you can't write "yay" backwards. well, actually you can, i just did. but whatever. okay, one correction. "Forty minutes later, we were standing in front of her office, enjoying cups of coffee. She showed me hers, with its nice wood floors, comfy sofa, and desk with flowers on the corner." it sounds like her coffee has nice wood floors and a sofa and desk and flowers. i would re-arrange the sentence. to something like putting coffee first, then say standing outside her office building. other than that, good! |
Nova laVie 4/17/08 . chapter 16o this was good1 i feel sad for zach now. And who was that with Destry i wonder? |
Parchment Quill 4/16/08 . chapter 16Wow, what an interesting way to end it. "'I need a ride.'" Anyways, update soon. |
Helizabeth 4/16/08 . chapter 16o! what will Destry do? will he scream his head of at tyler? will he leave in a huff? i can't look! agh! no, the monster is eating my leg! agh... |
Parchment Quill 4/13/08 . chapter 15I am so sorry about not reviewing until now, but I am here now. Anyways, interesting chapter. It's good that you explained it all from Destry's perspective. Update soon. |
CharismaticOutCry 4/9/08 . chapter 15Oh gosh! Oh no! I just read your whole story in one sitting and Oh My God! I need to know what happens next! They'll be together in the end right? You are a really wonderful writer. Keep up the good work. |
Nova laVie 4/8/08 . chapter 15That was great! very well done i like how you told it all from his pov without leaving anything out yet not over/re-doing anything from the last chapter. it was great. i Can Not wait to read the Natalie and Destry chapter. |