 runswithvamp 2009-06-22 . chapter 3i totally guessed his last name was going to be greene |
 Language Lover 2009-02-13 . chapter 18I can't believe that this is where it ends. There should be a sequel. I hope so. I feel bad for poor Ty. |
 .shiftblue 2008-05-20 . chapter 18=/ I feel like there's too much left unexplained still. Why did Natalie identify Ty as her rapist if he'd never seen her before? And who was it, if Ty was innocent? I wish the two had met somewhere in the story.
Other than that, it was pretty cute. I kind of felt that Tyler and Destry's relationship moved too fast, but it was still enjoyable. |
 Parchment Quill 2008-05-10 . chapter 18Nice ending. And a nice story too. All the drama finally over in a nice, sappy ending. Glad that those two are finally together again. |
 Jazbkwm-unlucky-13 2008-05-09 . chapter 18This was a great story. Awesome job. XD |
 Helizabeth 2008-05-09 . chapter 18a! it's finished! i loved it! completely loved it! and that wasn't too corny! though i am a sucker for corny romantic **. |
 blackberrydream 2008-04-29 . chapter 17This is a nice story, it has good characters and a good plot. The writing could be better though, There were a few grammer and spelling mistakes throughout this story but other than that, it's good. Very emotional! Can't wait to read more. |
 Parchment Quill 2008-04-25 . chapter 17Interesting chapter. Destry's sister seemed a little too cool with it all though. Anyways, update soon, I want to see what is going to happen between Destry and Tyler. |
 Helizabeth 2008-04-24 . chapter 17yay! do i start every review like that? i don't mean to be boring, but you can't write "yay" backwards. well, actually you can, i just did. but whatever. okay, one correction. "Forty minutes later, we were standing in front of her office, enjoying cups of coffee. She showed me hers, with its nice wood floors, comfy sofa, and desk with flowers on the corner." it sounds like her coffee has nice wood floors and a sofa and desk and flowers. i would re-arrange the sentence. to something like putting coffee first, then say standing outside her office building. other than that, good! |
 D's Silly G 2008-04-17 . chapter 16o this was good1
i feel sad for zach now. And who was that with Destry i wonder? |
 Parchment Quill 2008-04-16 . chapter 16Wow, what an interesting way to end it. "'I need a ride.'" Anyways, update soon. |
 Helizabeth 2008-04-16 . chapter 16o! what will Destry do? will he scream his head of at tyler? will he leave in a huff? i can't look! agh! no, the monster is eating my leg! agh... |
 Parchment Quill 2008-04-13 . chapter 15I am so sorry about not reviewing until now, but I am here now. Anyways, interesting chapter. It's good that you explained it all from Destry's perspective. Update soon. |
 CharismaticOutCry 2008-04-09 . chapter 15Oh gosh! Oh no!
I just read your whole story in one sitting and Oh My God!
I need to know what happens next! They'll be together in the end right?
You are a really wonderful writer. Keep up the good work. |
 D's Silly G 2008-04-08 . chapter 15That was great! very well done< i like how you told it all from his pov without leaving anything out yet not over/re-doing anything from the last chapter. it was great. i Can Not wait to read the Natalie and Destry chapter. |