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| Parchment Quill 2008-05-10 ch 18,  | abuseNice ending. And a nice story too. All the drama finally over in a nice, sappy ending. Glad that those two are finally together again. |
| Jazbkwm-unlucky-13 2008-05-09 ch 18, | abuseThis was a great story. Awesome job. XD |
| NOT an emo freak 2008-05-09 ch 18, | abusea! it's finished! i loved it! completely loved it! and that wasn't too corny! though i am a sucker for corny romantic **. |
| blackberrydream 2008-04-29 ch 17, | abuseThis is a nice story, it has good characters and a good plot. The writing could be better though, There were a few grammer and spelling mistakes throughout this story but other than that, it's good. Very emotional! Can't wait to read more. |
| Parchment Quill 2008-04-25 ch 17, | abuseInteresting chapter. Destry's sister seemed a little too cool with it all though. Anyways, update soon, I want to see what is going to happen between Destry and Tyler. |
| NOT an emo freak 2008-04-24 ch 17, | abuseyay! do i start every review like that? i don't mean to be boring, but you can't write "yay" backwards. well, actually you can, i just did. but whatever. okay, one correction. "Forty minutes later, we were standing in front of her office, enjoying cups of coffee. She showed me hers, with its nice wood floors, comfy sofa, and desk with flowers on the corner." it sounds like her coffee has nice wood floors and a sofa and desk and flowers. i would re-arrange the sentence. to something like putting coffee first, then say standing outside her office building. other than that, good! |
| D's Silly G 2008-04-17 ch 16, | abuseo this was good1 i feel sad for zach now. And who was that with Destry i wonder? |
| Parchment Quill 2008-04-16 ch 16, | abuseWow, what an interesting way to end it. "'I need a ride.'" Anyways, update soon. |
| NOT an emo freak 2008-04-16 ch 16, | abuseo! what will Destry do? will he scream his head of at tyler? will he leave in a huff? i can't look! agh! no, the monster is eating my leg! agh... |
| Parchment Quill 2008-04-13 ch 15, | abuseI am so sorry about not reviewing until now, but I am here now. Anyways, interesting chapter. It's good that you explained it all from Destry's perspective. Update soon. |
| Taywa-Renae 2008-04-09 ch 15, | abuseOh gosh! Oh no! I just read your whole story in one sitting and Oh My God! I need to know what happens next! They'll be together in the end right? You are a really wonderful writer. Keep up the good work. |
| D's Silly G 2008-04-08 ch 15, | abuseThat was great! very well done< i like how you told it all from his pov without leaving anything out yet not over/re-doing anything from the last chapter. it was great. i Can Not wait to read the Natalie and Destry chapter. |
| NOT an emo freak 2008-04-08 ch 15, | abuseDestry better stop being such and @ss and listen to Tyler! God, you're so frikin stupid! agghh! seriously though, they are going to get back together, right? or is it going to be one of those sad and sweet, I'm looking back and realized I never gave you a chance to explain, to fix our broken love. i like both ideas. |
| Failure Played In Stereo 2008-04-08 ch 15, | abuseThe end? The end! No! That's not fair =[[ Hehe, sorry. I actually enjoyed this chapter, although it was sad. I hope they can work it out. It's obvios they're supposed to be together ^_^ Update soon =D x |
| Failure Played In Stereo 2008-04-03 ch 14, | abuseAww, I hate cliffhangers! Awesome chapter though, kinda sad bout him and Destry. I hope he comes around in the end =] Updaties soon? x |