|Reviews for Try Again|
| Helizabeth 3/17/08 . chapter 12
that's funny, i'm listening to "Hey Jude" right now. oh, i do have one question on Ty's whole Destry-Natalie quandry. if MY sister was raped, then i would want to go to court when the guy they suspected was tried. why didn't Destry? 'cause if MY sister was raped, then i would remember and be afraid of the guy forever. other than that, good chappy! very informative.
| Parchment Quill 3/17/08 . chapter 12
Interesting chapter, a bit too long. Update soon.
| Failure Played In Stereo 3/15/08 . chapter 11
Oh dear, that isn't very good...
And I can't believe Laura! She just got back with Danny, she can't be making out with random guys. Disgraceful.
Great chapter! Update soon ]
| Parchment Quill 3/11/08 . chapter 11
| Carlette 3/11/08 . chapter 11
Well, I sort of expected that, but still! When I was reading it I was seriously at the edge of my seat! I'm really interested in how he's going to explain this to Destry... man, that would be so hard!
And I'm a little PO'd at Laura for making out with some other guy! I thought she was working on her and Danny's relationship again!
GAH! I hope you update really soon! and I hope it's at least a teensy weensy bit longer!
| LoneWolf-234 3/11/08 . chapter 11
aw! so sad 0.0 i hope everything turns out alright!
| Switch 3/6/08 . chapter 10
Despite the many plot holes that I am valiantly trying to ignore, I really enjoy this story. I like your characters a lot and I'm looking forward to seeing where you are going with this.
But since there ARE plot holes, it's really my civic duty and my odd neurotic need that I have to point them out to you. First, where was the evidence that he did it? Really without a DNA match of some kind, there's no way he would've been convicted. That said, after he was convicted, he probably wouldn't have had to serve the full sentence. Judging by his character, he would've gotten out on good behavior. And does he have an prison tats? Did anyone make him their bitch? Being a 16 year old boy, he wouldn't have made it out untouched.
And when he was out, as a convicted rapist, he would also be a registered sex offender and would have to tell his neighbors by legal obligation. Also, I'm pretty sure after your released from prison, you have to check in with your parole officer before traveling between states. I could be wrong there, though.
All that said, you might want to go through and tweak some things if you are neurotic like I am, or if you really don't care (which honestly is understandable if you're just writing for fun, but if you want to eventually do this for a living or something, I would suggest more research) you can ignore this and continue with your story. Either way, I'm adding it to my alert and I look forward to updates. _
| Carlette 3/5/08 . chapter 10
They're such a cute couple! I love them!
But you left me wanting more! That's just torture! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON OR I WILL DIE! Okay, I guess that's a bit extreme, but I don't care!
| LoneWolf-234 3/5/08 . chapter 10
gahh bad ending! erg that cant happen! well...i quess i cant wait for more?
| Helizabeth 3/5/08 . chapter 10
oh shit! they can't break up! it's just not right! good chappy tho!
| Parchment Quill 3/5/08 . chapter 10
"Little did I know that the one little party would be the metaphorical shove off the top of the cliff, the literal breaking point of my relationship with Destry, the end." Oh my, that sounds depressing. And such a cute couple too. Update soon.
| Failure Played In Stereo 3/5/08 . chapter 10
Ah wait! What? No!
He cannot split up with Destry. That is unallowed. [
Don't go to the damn party!
| Helizabeth 3/3/08 . chapter 9
aww! i feel so sad for Zach! but i still like Destry best.
| Helizabeth 2/25/08 . chapter 6
even if i cry tears for you Zach, YOU DON'T DISS DESTRY LIKE THAT! yay for guys making out looking really hot!
| Helizabeth 2/25/08 . chapter 5
yay for gay love!