Very nice story with a plot, actually with two subplots.

I had some problems because some of the sentences sounded weird (like this one: I wish I hadn’t ever come here, I would tell you how to fix it, if I know (maybe if you drop ever), but actually I’m clueless (English is not my first language as I suspect is not yours either) and I recommend you use in the dialogue: isn’t, aren’t, you’re, that’s, etc, sounds more natural…but it doesn’t really matter…You have a PLOT, an actual plot.

I finally got a chance to finish this story. This school term has been a nightmare. I have no like do anything.

I really liked it. You very creative this it and it turned out great. Woo Hyuk being his 'stepbrother' I didn't see that one coming. I was thinking it was going to be Hee Jun, but when it turn to be Woo Hyuk I like wow.

I thought long about what's wrong with the first sentence, and then it hit me; it's a passive sentence. It doesn't grab. I also think if the name of the airport was stated instead of the country, it would be more...interesting XD

And then the first paragraph continues the same way. It tells instead of showing and takes the lazy road. Instead, it could show what happens, and that way give a picture of the character too. I don't mean the physical traits necessarily, but more what kind of a person he is. I think if that changed, the whole story would be...well master class!

I love korea XD Good story!

Ah! Hee Jun is ADORABLE! Lol. I love him! And I love this story. Now, on to the next chapter with me! _

Ah! I love this story! I especially like the name of the club. It made me giggle when I read it. But anyways, I love Asia and I'm really glad this story takes place there! It shows a certain knowledge of a lot of cultures and that's really cool; one day, I wanna write a story that takes palce in Asia...but I kind of have to actually go there, so I know what I'm talking about, huh? Hehe, anyways, I'll read the next few chatpers tomorrow! Lovin' it so far! _

“Oh God, will you ever let that go?”

lolz

Poor Tony, it's not his fault that Woo Hyuk has a sexy smile.

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I loved you fic, great work!

AW! Hee Jun is so dorky but so sweet! What a happy ending for everyone! YAY!

LOL The last line! Woo Hyuk is so romantic! XD As much as I wish they would have just run into each others arms and had rainbows and hearts flying everywhere, I like what you wrote alot better lol

Yayz!

Tony don't leave! .

Great work!

Haha, that ending was great for this chapter. I really like how they each handled the situation. I would have reacted the same way as Tony in this situation, laugh hysterically then cry. Loved it, can't wait for more!

o interesting. Very interesting.

Aghh! Darn cliffhanger! haha My anticipation is skyrocketing, seriously.

Aw poor Tony! I just want to go cry for him. Except that they're not really brothers so... XD

Awesome story by the way. I absolutly love it!

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AH! Cliff hanger! Poor Tony, locked in his room and suffering! I hope theres a happy ending to all this or I'll just cry! That's encouragement, huh? lol

Hee Jun and Kang Ta are so sweet! Their scene was so heart warming, it made me want to swoon! lol I can't wait to see what you do with Tony and Woo Hyuk