That was an intriguing ending. I'm interested. Please update soon.

~Twilight Starr

Lol, I wonder who that naked woman is in Hero's bed... You must update soon! I can't wait to read more!

kayas HOW old? O_O i like the last line. it really makes me curious. update quickly!

ooh irrylath sounds cool too. ever read the darkangel trilogy? probly not but one of the characters is named irrylath

i like tenshi shes really cool. but heros brother is blind now?

sounds intresting. ill read on

Awesome. I can draw anime okay (or says my friends) so if I can maybe I'll try one day and email them to you or sometin. This is really intersting man! Finish it please!

Great chapter. I really enjoy that you aren't just focusing on 1 or 2 characters and that you are actually introducing other in-depth characters. It's great to have a main character and to focus on them but a good story needs other 'real' characters to keep the reader reading.

I can't wait to see how things progress from here.

Wow. That last line made me curious. The rules were nice to know, but they kind of caught me off guard. Nice work. Sorry for taking so long to R&R. Have a fantastic summer.

~Twilight Starr~

yaay i like this story so far!! very good job and keep updating!

WOW this is gonna make a great manga...
you'd be really good at writing Death Note fanfiction.
I can't wait till the new chapter!
keep writing,
LL

This officially became my favorite story on FP. Tenshi is the best thing since bread. I know nothing of shinigami besides from what I've seen in Bleach in Death Note. Also I think Botan was a shinigami in Yu Yu Hakusho. I see you use other types of mythologies too like the Okami. Whats next, the kitsune? (9 tailed demon fox) Dont forsake me and never update again.

I know just what you mean. You can tell people read the story but they jus dont review. Anyway, I like your writing style. I can just tell whats going on by your nice wording. And thanks for reading Sweeper. Keep reading if you enjoy. It only gets better.

I can't wait to find out what happens to Hero and Tenshi! Update soon!

Great story! I will read on...