OH.MY.GOSH.
I want MORE!! Lol. That was a really interesting excerpt

*gasp* i can see why you are publishing your works. they are incredible. when does this one come out?

that's it...? really? you didn't put up how it went what happened? if they even got back together. or are we just supposed to guess...
umm ok. it was yeah.

okay i am confused where did the rest of this story go??

love this story..it was good..

hey great story! but what happens next?...tel mee!

what?..thats it??

wait huh? what're you doing with this story?

wow! I can't believe you just ended there, but what an ending it was! This is really good!

Wow. That's all I have to say. WOW! This short story blew my mind. The dramatic situation that the two main charas are in mixed with the raw passion that they share in the end is awesome!!

Aw, that was very sweet. I'm glad they got back together.

I just wanna point out that in the summary for this story there shouldn't be a question mark at the end
not being critical
just telling u
Luv Angel_Of_Hatred

fluff! cute! sweet!

NICE ONE! even though there are a few grammer mistakes, but the story was beautiful (:

I loved this story.