This was amazing. No other words needed. Just plain amazing.

~Rasheya~

This is a beautiful poem. I love it. Right you are about my brothers.

Powerful. the last two lines were great.

its kinda graphic, but it really shows the point your trying to get out. you did good on this.

its thought provoking.
Good job
~ Neteri Bennu

wonderful poem. i've never been known to like poems about war, but this one i really like. the emotion is great and blunt.

yours until the wind changes,
Lost