This has some senses of Faulknerian imagery and stream-of-consicousness techniques, but it is simpler, more precise, and in that way more powerfully expresses what he would have done with many pages.

You have done a good job with the way in which truth and falsehood or whatever other dualisms you might choose, fight against each other. and then there is the quiet submission to the quiet insistence of the truth.

God bless you.