Beautiful.

The words are longing and piercing, and I can really connect to this piece.

Keep up the great work. ^_^

I share the same feelings towards the subject.

Be well-assured that you did an excellent job of conveying that emotion through simple words. Excellent.

~ Horace Greeley

Oh my. I loved it. I really did. The rhyming and the flow was just amazing. And I know this feeling too...and it sucks...

I really like your word choice and the way you formatted it. Good poem, and true to life. Nice work!
~Gemma