I really liked this! Although it got a little hard to read with the setup, but I liked the words you used to express the emotions, although they were the kind that was a little hard to understand at times. Still, a great poem! It had an air of mystic in it, since it's about a story not yet told. Keep at it!

The Reverse Edge Blade

It most certainly does make a difference. As I was reading I could feel myself talking as different characters. Good job. Keep it Up!