That was...really good.
I guess when you accomplish something big, 'good'
just sounds inadequate (I know how it feels)

But I'm trying to sum up everything in 'really good'.

It was heart-felt, touching, cute, quirky, sad, funny, tragic and everything else.

Hehe, bluenette, I love that! But this was really sad:( *sniff sniff* I liked the repeated paragraphs, and I'm glad Simon turned out to be such a sweetie!

You know, I can really feel what Kyle went through. I only hope I can be as strong as him.

The boy I love has AIDS as well.

Thank you for the great read.

~Teodora

Wow, that was really good. It was different from what I usually read, but good-different. The only thing I have to say, (I'm sorry!) is that sometimes I didn't understand who was talking, and had to reread certain conversations. But that just might be because I'm really tired. Anyways, I love your story! (Especially how you tied the first paragraph in to the end, that was cool.)

I liked it. It was interesting... I'm not really into the whole gay thing. But it makes me want to read more. One criticism - and this is just a personal opinion, so don't take it too hard - but if I were you I wouldn't use swearing in my stories. It isn't necessary, and for me at least, it taints the story a little. You can express yourself in a different way. (Wow, I sound like an English professor, giving a lecture. :) Just think about it. Remember, I did say I like the story. :) Keep writing!
~Daughter of Music