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Reviews For: The Bird in his Cage

Dreaming Chica
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. I love the comparisions in the poem, the crimianl and sins, the bird in the cage and the person. So well done! Made you feel like you were in the poem!

♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
Kusje
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseInteresting poem structure. I was a bit confused with the first line because of how its placed, but I got the overall meaning. Good job on this.
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