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| Dreaming Chica 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I love the comparisions in the poem, the crimianl and sins, the bird in the cage and the person. So well done! Made you feel like you were in the poem! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| Kusje 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseInteresting poem structure. I was a bit confused with the first line because of how its placed, but I got the overall meaning. Good job on this. |