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goldenspork 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant. :) I have to say, I agree with you on pretty much all that, except the Alexandra part. I actually don't know anyone named Alex, and I really like the name. I definately agreed with the chat speak thing, and over using adjectives... sometimes it makes me want to beat my head against the wall. :)
Hyperroll 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abuseNice. I don't usually write romance fics on fictionpress and I hardly have any writing on here as it is, but I read this anyway and I can't say that I disagree with any of this. I'm very glad this was written because some people just need to learn how to write. I mean, the idea may be great but the execution is what really matters in the end. So thank you for writing this. I hope that people who do write clichéd stories on this site read this and pick up a thing or 10.
Robyn2250 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseIs there anyway we can make this a requirement for all fan fiction authors? I agree with everything you've written about. I can't tell you the number of times I have quickly hit the "back" button because an author has abused one of your rules. Those fics drive me crazy.
kitkat74 2008-06-08 ch 1,	abuseHey, I read your complaints and I agree. But what stories do you really like? Could you post them so that other people can see what stories are best? If you can that would be awsoem thanks
Pinkamoo 2008-06-03 ch 1,	abuseI think I agree with EVERYTHING (almost) in this story :p I mean, name tattooed across them? I have that written in one of my stories, but it was because of a curse, and the character would not have put it there otherwise. Never. Ever. Because if they did that on purpose...if anyone tattooed my name across their chest I'd either laugh or go "What the hell? You idiot! Why did you do that?" I only disagree with the Alex thing, as my name is very overused also. My name is Amy, and it is in one of your examples. I don't care when my name is used in stories, because I believe the character makes the name. I only know 2 people named Alex, so it shouldn't be restricted for any reason :p
Dreamless_Infinity 2008-05-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseDid you actually write a story based on your summary? Because I REALLY want to read it. Oh, and I agree about starting to read a story, then a few sentences into it press the back button. It's happened too many times to count. ~Dreamless~
BluePillow75 2008-05-30 ch 1,	abuseYou have some really interessting opinions here, I don´t agree with them all, but most of them. I think that in "Exhibit A" you are half wright, it depends on the story. Sometimes it can be fun if the writer leavs a little note in the middle, but it depends on what the note is ofcourse. B. Here I have no disagreements at all. C. I can´t really say I agree or disagree, I havn´t read it that often, but you probebly have read more then me... D. Here you are totaly right, I think it is so annoying when it is like that! E. Yeah, I mean small descriptions are okay, but... yeah... F. Same as last one. G. Hmm... never thought of that. I apologise if my spelling and grammar annoys you, I am lazy and don´t correct them all, but hey! as long it isn´t in a story it should be okay ;)
M. Jean 2008-05-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseThroughout the course of this work I noticed exactly eight grammatical errors that I would like to point out. While reading your other work I noticed that you repeatedly make the same mistakes. 1) Though you mention your distaste of repeating the same word multiple times, I noticed that you yourself make this exact same error. 2) Inappropriate use of commas. 3) Spelling mistakes. (Examples in this piece would be capatalizing, over used [this should be one word], etc...) 4) Several typos. (For instance, writing is when you meant to write it.) 5) Poor sentence structure. And several more. I did find this piece very entertaining and couldn't agree more with most of your points, however, there were a few of your criticisms that I could not help but to disagree with. For example, banning the name Alex from any stories is more of an opinion than helpful advice to authors-to-be. I look forward to any future pieces you may write. Sincerely, M. Jean
A Rose in December 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseDon't worry, you didn't waste ten minutes of my life after all.
found.eventually 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseHAHAHAHAHAHA. Gosh, I loved the one with the tattoo. That was classic, really. I've never actually read any stories that had the MC talking about whatever brand she/he was wearing/using as much as the example you gave, but I think I'd die laughing if I ever, ever see one. Loved it. :)
WalkingWithAGhost 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abuseCan I just say thankyou? That was brilliant (and completely necessary) - THANKYOU. I have to completely agree with you on the Alex thing also(coincidence - that's my name too). The name is beyond overused. As for every other point you made - I'm practically clapping at my keyboard right now.
thecoconutbubble 2008-05-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou nailed that. Thank you for taking the time to put somebody in their place. You're my hero.
Esque 2008-05-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseI agree with most of your points, but some I have problems with, particularly because I believe they are more your personal opinion than any sort of "writing guideline" or "enlightenment". The "did not"/"didn't" issue: in a first person perspective and in dialogue, I personally believe that it is better to use contractions - it's more natural, and lends an air of realism to the character. Using words like " 'cuz" is unacceptable in narrative, but can be allowed in dialogue, again, for character. I would also say no to underlines and bolds - anything past italics is fairly unprofessional, and even those are rejected at times; the italics in one of my short stories were taken out entirely by the publisher. When it comes to the waking up and the tattoos, I admit they're cliché, but not "impossible". I'd say that if the author is good enough to make it work, go for it. Same with the naming thing. It's all your opinion there, really. Otherwise, this was amusing to read.
d666lisa 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseVery clever, you make some good points :)
Lily Llynn 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseI know exactly what you mean (for my c2, I've read... lost count oneshots.), though I think I've committed a few of those crimes. XD I see no sin against the name Alex (IT'S A COOL NAME), even though I agree it's overused. I don't like seeing every character have obscure names either. But yes, good way to hook us and a good set of tips (or whatever else you would call them). Even though this isn't romance, I think it needs to be read so I'll add it to my c2. (: We'll see who disagrees. XD

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